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LARKIYAN KHOOB KAAM KARTI HAIN

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Old 11-19-2004, 11:32 AM
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baly balay diya jeeeeeee dil khush kar diyaaa aap nay.udaaas jee aik or jawab hay aap kay liyeeeeeee.

ye larkay bhi kitnay kaam kartay hain
aj nam inkay ham apna kalam kartay hain

hay kam inka subha sham larkian takna
partay hain jotay inko phir bhi salam kartay hain

office ho college ya ho koi bazar
ghatia pan kar kay larkian raam kartay hain

subha nikaltay hain ghar say parhaiyi karnay ko
magar gali main kissi larki ki sham kartay hain

aik aik class main rehtay hain 5 saal
bacharay man bap ko badnam kartay hai

masom koi larki gar a jay in ki baaton main
ye uski tashir gali gali aam kartay hain

bawafaiyiiiiiii to inki ghuti main hay pari huiii
magar ye kamzarfi say larki ko sar_e_ ilzam kartay hain

ab ham hain madan_e_ jang main udass jee
deetay hain warnning aap ko ilan khas_o_ aam kartay hain
/toomuch

/weldone suman bauhat khoob

haangi ab kisi larkai ko kuch kehna hai yahan /jin3
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Bijlian mujh pe kyun gir rahi hain
larkiyan mujh se kyun chir rahi hain
Mere dil bata mera kasoor hai kiya
Aandhiyan har taraf chal rahi hain
larkiyan mujh se yun lar rahi hain
Mere dil bata mein ne kiya keh diya
larkiyan jis tarhan jal rahi hain
aag jis tarhan ugal rahi hain
Puchiay to zara, inhen shikwa hai kiya
larkon pe khud yeh mar rahi hain
phir hum pe kyun bigar rahi hain
Mere dil bata yeh sach nahi hai kiya
Haqeeqat se khud yeh phir rahi hain
Bijlian mujh pe kyun gir rahi hain

Shetan bhi panah maang raha hai
larkiyan khud aisi balaa hain
Sath in ka koi na dey saka hai
Saaya bhi duur bhaag raha hai
Mere dil bata yeh haqeeqat hai kiya
larkiyan sab yahan bewafa hain
choti si baat pe jo khafa hain


hehehe.... sab se pehle to mein Diya aur Sumanshah ko daad doon ga ke unhon ne bohat mazedaar qisam ka jawab diya hai. /clap5

Sab larkiyon ko khush kar diya inhon ne. Hum nahin jaante they ke Diya larkon ke baray mein itni jaankaari rakhti hain. Hum ne inki aik ghazal ka jawab diya tha, inhon ne humari ghazal ka jawab de diya, ab inse to hisab barabar. Aur sumanshah.... inki to kia hi baat hai. Inhon ne is post ko aur mazedaar bana diya.

Mehar.... humein bohat khushi hui aap ko humara siggy pasand aaya.... hum ne khud apne haathon se graphics compose ki hain. b-) Btw, lagta hai aap neechay se post parhna shuru karti hain, next time hum aap ke liay khali siggy post kar dein gay.

Inaam bhai aap ki support ka bohat shukriya, aap ne reply kar ke humari hosla afzai ki yehi bohat hai. Larkiyon se hum khud jaan booch kar haar maan lete hain kyunke yeh pehle hi bari hasas hoti hain aur hum nahi chahte ke inka nazuk dil toot jaye.... aap to jante hi hain yeh choti choti baat pe naraz ho jati hain aur phir inhein manana kitna mushkil hota hai.

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Old 11-19-2004, 05:13 PM
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hmm is ka matlab hay aap nay baz nahi anaaa.theeek hay phir aik or jawabi ghazal hazir hay.

too nay baatain bohat baniyi hain
soi hui sheerniaaaaaan jagiyi hain

is liyee bijlian tum par gir rahi hain
is liyee larkian tum say chir rahi hain

tera qasoor to naqabl_e_moffi hayyyyy
is liyeeeee jootian bahisab parh rahi hainnn

ham say hi hain rangeen zamanay saray
rang wafaon kay dunia main bhar rahi hain

kiun karti hain aitbar daghabaz larkon par
yehi soch kar har bar mar rahi hainnnnn


hay kam bas tumara dilon say kheelna
tumari hi dastanain har gali bikher rahi hain

hab bawafa gar hoteen to wafa kahin na hoti
ham ko hay naz khud par isliyee ye baat kar rahi hain
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/aoa

Lagta hai aap say buhat kuch seekhna paray ga....
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Originally Posted by sumanshah
hmm is ka matlab hay aap nay baz nahi anaaa.theeek hay phir aik or jawabi ghazal hazir hay.

too nay baatain bohat baniyi hain
soi hui sheerniaaaaaan jagiyi hain

is liyee bijlian tum par gir rahi hain
is liyee larkian tum say chir rahi hain

tera qasoor to naqabl_e_moffi hayyyyy
is liyeeeee jootian bahisab parh rahi hainnn

ham say hi hain rangeen zamanay saray
rang wafaon kay dunia main bhar rahi hain

kiun karti hain aitbar daghabaz larkon par
yehi soch kar har bar mar rahi hainnnnn


hay kam bas tumara dilon say kheelna
tumari hi dastanain har gali bikher rahi hain

hab bawafa gar hoteen to wafa kahin na hoti
ham ko hay naz khud par isliyee ye baat kar rahi hain

/toomuch

bas kardo suman bechara haal behaal ho jai ga /toomuch
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Originally Posted by udaas
Bijlian mujh pe kyun gir rahi hain
larkiyan mujh se kyun chir rahi hain
Mere dil bata mera kasoor hai kiya
Aandhiyan har taraf chal rahi hain
larkiyan mujh se yun lar rahi hain
Mere dil bata mein ne kiya keh diya
larkiyan jis tarhan jal rahi hain
aag jis tarhan ugal rahi hain
Puchiay to zara, inhen shikwa hai kiya
larkon pe khud yeh mar rahi hain
phir hum pe kyun bigar rahi hain
Mere dil bata yeh sach nahi hai kiya
Haqeeqat se khud yeh phir rahi hain
Bijlian mujh pe kyun gir rahi hain

Shetan bhi panah maang raha hai
larkiyan khud aisi balaa hain
Sath in ka koi na dey saka hai
Saaya bhi duur bhaag raha hai
Mere dil bata yeh haqeeqat hai kiya
larkiyan sab yahan bewafa hain
choti si baat pe jo khafa hain


hehehe.... sab se pehle to mein Diya aur Sumanshah ko daad doon ga ke unhon ne bohat mazedaar qisam ka jawab diya hai. /clap5

Sab larkiyon ko khush kar diya inhon ne. Hum nahin jaante they ke Diya larkon ke baray mein itni jaankaari rakhti hain. Hum ne inki aik ghazal ka jawab diya tha, inhon ne humari ghazal ka jawab de diya, ab inse to hisab barabar. Aur sumanshah.... inki to kia hi baat hai. Inhon ne is post ko aur mazedaar bana diya.

Mehar.... humein bohat khushi hui aap ko humara siggy pasand aaya.... hum ne khud apne haathon se graphics compose ki hain. b-) Btw, lagta hai aap neechay se post parhna shuru karti hain, next time hum aap ke liay khali siggy post kar dein gay.

Inaam bhai aap ki support ka bohat shukriya, aap ne reply kar ke humari hosla afzai ki yehi bohat hai. Larkiyon se hum khud jaan booch kar haar maan lete hain kyunke yeh pehle hi bari hasas hoti hain aur hum nahi chahte ke inka nazuk dil toot jaye.... aap to jante hi hain yeh choti choti baat pe naraz ho jati hain aur phir inhein manana kitna mushkil hota hai.

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aap ki shairi achi hoti hai kuch alag sai andaz hota hai isai mind koi nahi karta kyon kai mazak ko samajhtai hain sab aur mujhe to koi jaan kaari nahi hai /bhago mein nai to bas jawab diya hai na /choom

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SUMANSHAH NE BHI KHOOB KAAM KIA HAI
UDAAS KA JEENA HARAAM KIA HAI

IS SE PEHLE KE HUM KUCH KALAM BAND KARTE
UNHON NE PEHLE HI JAWAB KA INTEZAM KIA HAI

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SUMANSHAH NE BHI KHOOB KAAM KIA HAI
UDAAS KA JEENA HARAAM KIA HAI

IS SE PEHLE KE HUM KUCH KALAM BAND KARTE
UNHON NE PEHLE HI JAWAB KA INTEZAM KIA HAI

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