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la'kalam

This is a discussion on la'kalam within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by WorThless. La'klam ho ker Bohat khoobsurat likha hey ..! thorey sey lafzon main kitna kuch bayan ker ...


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Old 07-16-2004, 07:49 AM
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La'klam ho ker

Bohat khoobsurat likha hey ..! thorey sey lafzon main kitna kuch bayan ker deya hey tum ney Aaina @};- bohat khoob

jeeti raho
khush raho sada
abad raho @};-


hmmmmmmm....... baas likh diya jo dil chah raha tha..... aur kuch khas nahi... shukria pasand karne ka @};-

khush rahein...ameen
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umda khial hai /rose
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jaani ki jaani /hug1

kitni khoob aai hoon.....zara bataoo na...

(.....) so much chanda.... tumhain to sari hi achi lagti hain..... koi achi nahi hai yeh


bas hameesha khush rahoo..../ilu

hai jaani

tum likhti hi itna acha ho kai mien kya kahoon ab /hug2

aur haan ye bhi achi hai balkai bauhat achi hai samjhi tum moti sariyal yaan mein samjhoon u ko .shokhi


khush raho bas /rose
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yaheen pe khari hoon be'awaaz
sab se guftagu hoti hai
khud se la'kalam ho kar...

bahot hi khoobsurat.......... ..
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salam!
sab say guftagoo hoti hai......khud say lakalam ho kar..............thi s line is the gist of the whole poem.keep sharing.
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umda khial hai /rose


shukria janaab,,,,@};-
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hai jaani

tum likhti hi itna acha ho kai mien kya kahoon ab /hug2

aur haan ye bhi achi hai balkai bauhat achi hai samjhi tum moti sariyal yaan mein samjhoon u ko .shokhi


khush raho bas /rose



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nahi nahi tum aub aur na samjhaoo.... main samajh gai hoon :-p

:* khush rahoo
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yaheen pe khari hoon be'awaaz
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bahot hi khoobsurat.......... ..


bohot shukria mystique @};-
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salam!
sab say guftagoo hoti hai......khud say lakalam ho kar..............thi s line is the gist of the whole poem.keep sharing.
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Thanks so much Bina.... for such a lovely complement...@};-
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