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This is a discussion on lafz meri sansoon main kiun ulajhty jaty hain within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; salam aik nai nazm aap sab ki nazar shayad k aap logon ko pasand aajay lafz meri sansoon main phir ...
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#1
04-29-2008, 01:21 PM
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salam aik nai nazm aap sab ki nazar shayad k aap logon ko pasand aajay  lafz meri sansoon main phir ulajhty jaty hain koi nazm phir sey siiney main jo bhatakti jati hy zindagi k kaghaz par titliyoN k saray rang mil k aik doojay say rang khubsoorat sa ik naya banatay haiN aur maiN k rangoN say nazm kehna chahti hooN kuch bhi keh na pati hooN dukh k kitnay darya jo zindagi k kaghaz par titliyoN k rangoN ko is tarah miTatay haiN khamshi sulagti hai dard gungunatay haiN aansuoN ki barish maiN khaab bheeg jatay haiN owr.... phir... lafz myri sansoon main phir ulajhty jaty hain nazm mery siiney main phir bhatakti jati hey Last edited by Aisha Baig; 05-20-2008 at 11:38 AM.         |
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#2
04-29-2008, 01:25 PM
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Bohot umdaa ji.........
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#3
04-29-2008, 01:29 PM
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dukh k kaaii darya hain jo zindagi k kaghaz par titliyoon k rangoon ko aansoowon ki barish sey aik dosry sey uljhaaty hain phir naya rang banaty hain phir naya zakhm lagaty hain phir nai nazm sajaty hain main kuch bhi likh na pati hoon yeh to bahut umda hai ji lekin lafz meri sansoon main kiun ulajhty jaty hain koi nazm phir sey siiney main jo bhatakti jati hy kya aapko nahi lagta hai ki kuchh alfaz kuchh betarteeb ho gaye hain
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#4
04-29-2008, 01:53 PM
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Mashallah Nice 1.gif ")1") |
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#5
04-29-2008, 02:02 PM
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bohat Khoob .................kee p Sharing apna Khayal Rakhyega |
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#6
04-29-2008, 04:48 PM
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#7
04-29-2008, 04:53 PM
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hmmmmmmmm nice jee atna pyara likha hey .......
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#8
04-29-2008, 06:56 PM
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bohat khoob Aisha...khush raho 
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#9
04-29-2008, 10:56 PM
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abb inho ne itna kuch keh diya humaary kehny kee koi zaroorat nahi lekin phir bhi superb very creative and vivid imagery and well selected language zabardast keep writing khush rahain jee and shukria
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#10
04-29-2008, 11:59 PM
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v nice................ .............. |
lafz meri sansoon main kiun ulajhty jaty hain 
