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lafz meri sansoon main kiun ulajhty jaty hain

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Old 05-11-2008, 06:39 AM
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Aisha tum acha likhti ho ..... mehroo ji nay jaisa kaha usay bhi zehn main rakhna.. nazm kehna ghazal say mushkil kam hay .... lekan jahan tak mera khyal hay ke achi nazm likhnay keliay pehlay achi ghazal likhna zaroori hay... kosish karna....

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aor mazeed agay baRho.... Alla karay.........
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nice one ayesha,
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Khawaab bheeg jatay hain

Bayhadd khobsoorat istalah, lutf diya bht iss nazm ne,

khush rehiya
buhut shukriya
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dukh k kitnay darya jo
zindagi k kaghaz par
titliyoN k rangoN ko
is tarah miTatay haiN
khamshi sulagti hai
dard gungunatay haiN
aansuoN ki barish maiN
khaab bheeg jatay haiN

Wah....Mujhe danmurfi se mukammal ittefaq hai.....Waqai in lines ka jawab nahin....bohot hi umda likha hai....baqi nazm main kuch technical issues hain jo Mehroo Sahiba ne highlight kiye hain.....unhen please dekh lijye ga


buhut shukriyaa janab
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salam,

very nice...........
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very nice excelent
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Rukhsat howa tu bat meri maan gaya
Apne sare dard mujhe daan kar gaya
Kitni sudhar gai hai judai main zindagi
Apni jafa se tu mujh pe ehsaan kar gaya
Bichda kuch iss ada se k rut he badal gai
Ik shakhs sare shehar ko veraan kar gaya
Ik dilchasp qissa hai kal aik aziz dost
Mujhe apne mufad pe qurban kar gaya
KhaliD bat bat pe kehta tha jisko jan
Wo shakhs akhrash mujhe bejaan kar gaya

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