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This is a discussion on lafz meri sansoon main kiun ulajhty jaty hain within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by 13 Mera 7 Rhey hmmmmmmmm nice jee atna pyara likha hey ....... buhut nawazish shukriya aapka janab...
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#21
05-05-2008, 10:44 PM
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#22
05-05-2008, 11:18 PM
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Khawaab bheeg jatay hain Bayhadd khobsoorat istalah, lutf diya bht iss nazm ne, khush rehiya 
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#23
05-06-2008, 08:12 PM
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buhut shukriya kanwal g aap ka tou nazar kar lyna bhi buhut hy buhut khushi hoti hy mujhy jab aap k comments aaty hain w/salam |
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#24
05-07-2008, 10:28 AM
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buhut buhut shukriya nawazish janab |
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#25
05-07-2008, 11:16 AM
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bohat khoosburat .. nice one ..
__________________  H'am Woh Saya'h Bakht Hain Tariq! K Shehar Main Jo Kholein Dukan Qaf'an Ki Toh Loag Marna He Chor Dain |
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#26
05-07-2008, 07:03 PM
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buhoot achi nazam heee aap ki |
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05-09-2008, 07:13 AM
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buhut nawazish atif sahab |
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#28
05-09-2008, 07:38 AM
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dukh k kitnay darya jo zindagi k kaghaz par titliyoN k rangoN ko is tarah miTatay haiN khamshi sulagti hai dard gungunatay haiN aansuoN ki barish maiN khaab bheeg jatay haiN Wah....Mujhe danmurfi se mukammal ittefaq hai.....Waqai in lines ka jawab nahin....bohot hi umda likha hai....baqi nazm main kuch technical issues hain jo Mehroo Sahiba ne highlight kiye hain.....unhen please dekh lijye ga
__________________ ******************** ******************* MaiN bulata to hooN usko magar aye jazba-e-dil Us pe ban jaye kuch aisi ke bin aaye na banay (Ghalib) Last edited by Saraabs; 05-09-2008 at 07:42 AM. |
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#29
05-09-2008, 07:49 PM
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doosri line yoon kar len tou nazm koi seene me phir bhatakne lagti hai -ya nzm koi seene me karwate badalti hai-ya nzm zehn me koi karwaten badalti hai - waghera .. isi tarah aur bhi rawani lai ja sakti hai hope you dont mind nice thoughts... keep writing |
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#30
05-10-2008, 08:07 AM
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Wah Wah Ayesha Bohat acha khayal bohat achey alfaz Mehroo ki baat per tawajuh deti rahiye aur likhti rehiye. Kher andesh Qamar
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Re: lafz meri sansoon main kiun ulajhty jaty hain 
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likhti raheN aur ham se share krti raheN, khush raheN aabad raheN....
