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This is a discussion on Kyun Aa ke Barisho-n Ki Fizaein Guzar Gai-n(Tarmeem ke sath) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Apni ghazal tarmim ke sath paish kar rahi hun. GHAZAL kyun aa ke barisho-n ki fizaein guzar gai-n pyasi zami-n ...
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| Apni ghazal tarmim ke sath paish kar rahi hun. GHAZAL kyun aa ke barisho-n ki fizaein guzar gai-n pyasi zami-n se dur ghataein guzar gai-n is dil ka kya karun ke theherta nahi-n kahi-n kaun-o- maka-n se aage nigahei-n guzar gai-n ab dosti ki chah na dusman se kuchh gila karti thi-n muztarib jo balaein guzar gai-n kuchh na suna us aakhri ek alwida ke baad paas aa ke kaisi kaisi sadaein guzar gai-n ab begunah the ya gunehgar is se kya jo katni thi humne sazaein guzar gai-n Noor apne ashiyane ka tinka nahin bacha is raaste se kaisi hawaein guzar gai-n |
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#2
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| Waaahhhh Bohut Hii Khoobsorat Ghazal Kahii Aap Neyn,,,,,,,,@};-
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| is dil ka kya karun ke theherta nahi-n kahi-n kaun-o- maka-n se aage nigahei-n guzar gai- pahlli baar aap ki koi kaawish parhi..bakhuda bohat khoob likha hay aap nay..share lkarttay rahiay ga..bohat lutf aaya..dhairoon daad qabool kijay ga.
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#4
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| ab begunah the ya gunehgar is se kya jo katni thi humne sazaein guzar gai-n Noor apne ashiyane ka tinka nahin bacha is raaste se kaisi hawaein guzar gai-n wahhhhhhhhhh..wahhh wahhhhhh...bhaee wahhhh... kiya khubsoorat...balkay bohat hi ziada khubsoorat ghazal kahi Noor.... kia kehnay... bohat ziada khushi ho rahi hai ke apka kalaam mashAllah behtar say behtareen ka safar tay karta ja raha hai.... ![]() khush raho
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#5
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| Buhat khoob , saray ashare hi lajawab hai , buhat pyari ghazal kahi hai , daad qubool kijiey Khuda karay zor-e-qalam aur bhi ziada Regards Samra
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#6
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behad shukriya pasaneedgi ke liye.bahut hausla afzai hoti hai aur likhne ko jee chata hai. |
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#7
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shkriya aap ne ise pasand kiya.isi tarah hausla afzai hoti rahi to inshallah aur likhne ki koshish karungi |
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#8
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| very well written keep it up
__________________ ![]() najanay kon duaaon mein yaad karta hay mein dobta hon, samndar uchal deta hay ...!! |