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brijinder"Sagar" ka kalaam

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Old 02-11-2006, 12:54 AM
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Kya KaruN?



Yeh nahi ki teray gum say main aashna nahi
Yeh nahi ki teray ashq mujhay rulaaty nahi
Magar mujhay bhi milay haiN kuch hwaadis aisay
Ahad-o-khwaab meray jo tujhay bataa paatay nahi

Toot kar main bhi bikhar raha hooN lamha-lamha
Din meray bhi raatoN say tareeqtar ho gayay haiN
Main bhi aNdairee chat daikhtay na jaanay kab sota hooN
Meray masarrat-o-chahat bhi khlaoN main kho gayay haiN

Mujhsay chupi nahi teri karwatoN main guzrati raataiN
Mainay daikhee haiN who pyaar ko tarpati aankhaiN
Mujhko maaloom hai ki tera gunahgaar hooN main
Mujhko pata hai ki tera pyaar hooN main

Khud say abhi door hooN saathi meri
Isliyay abhi majboor hooN saathi meri
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Old 02-11-2006, 04:14 AM
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wahh janaab... bohot hi umdaah nazm... andaz ke aitbaar se aghaaz Faiz aur ikhtetaam Sahir ka sa laga.... khobsoorat nazm... dhair sarii daad hazir hai...@};-

khush rahein...
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yeh aap ne sos mein bhi share ki hai na ??? was just confirming keh yeh gulti thi ya aap ne sahre ki hai :-s
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buhat khub
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Originally Posted by brijinder1232
Kya KaruN?



Yeh nahi ki teray gum say main aashna nahi
Yeh nahi ki teray ashq mujhay rulaaty nahi
Magar mujhay bhi milay haiN kuch hwaadis aisay
Ahad-o-khwaab meray jo tujhay bataa paatay nahi

Toot kar main bhi bikhar raha hooN lamha-lamha
Din meray bhi raatoN say tareeqtar ho gayay haiN
Main bhi aNdairee chat daikhtay na jaanay kab sota hooN
Meray masarrat-o-chahat bhi khlaoN main kho gayay haiN

Mujhsay chupi nahi teri karwatoN main guzrati raataiN
Mainay daikhee haiN who pyaar ko tarpati aankhaiN
Mujhko maaloom hai ki tera gunahgaar hooN main
Mujhko pata hai ki tera pyaar hooN main

Khud say abhi door hooN saathi meri
Isliyay abhi majboor hooN saathi meri

buhat khoob brijinder ji @};-

is misray mein tazkeer-o-tanees ki ghalati lag rahi hay mujhay
Meray masarrat-o-chahat bhi khlaoN main kho gayay haiN

aur dooosre ye kay musarrat farsi lafz hay jabkay chahat hindi... hindi alfaz kay saath farsi tarkeeb kerna bhi sahi nahin hay.. issko bhi dekh lijiye ga..

Khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye.. @};-
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Old 02-21-2006, 09:02 PM
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Default Hijr-o-visaal

Hijr-o-visaal

Fazaon ko phir vajeh si mil gayee mahakane ki
Afsurda badalon mein se chand phir muskuraya hai
Takhleeq meri mein phir aaney lagey hain shokhion ke dum
Labon pe phir koyee mast nagma ubhar aayaa hai

Phir se gaataa hai malhaar saaz-e-zeest mera
Phir se chayee hai takh_ ul pe aarzuon ke ghata
Jhumti bal khaati hai barq umeedon ki
Phir se wafa ki zard aarizo mein noor bhaa

Meri tanhaee bhi soyee hai aaj umron ke baad
Main bhi khud se mila huin baad muddat ke
Dard ki aankhon mein bhi hein aaj massrrat ke aansoo
Tamanna ko milay phir se pairhan haqeeqat ke

Besood nahin mahabbat ki wus_ ataiN
Dil phir yeh mananay ko karta hai
Khird phir bebus si khari hai
Junoon phir jaagney ko karta hai

Aaj tu aayee hai to pathra gayee hai shikvon ki zbaaN
Kho gyay hain gilon ke bol kahin khalaaon mein
Meetha taanaa sa detaa hai beetee udaasee ka chehra
"Bhool gayaa hai "Sagar" usey vasl ki shuaon mein"

Abhi kuch pal mein toot jayega waqt-e-vasl ka dum
Phir se laut jayengey hum liye majboorion ke daaman
Tu meri ho ke bhi meri na hogi kabhi
Teri majboorian hain yeh duniya ke bemaar aqayud
Main bhi majboor huun in haalaat ke haathon humnufs meri
Aatee rhaa karo milnay jab talak mumkin hai
Kyuon na tab talaq ishq ko apnay
vajah miltee rahey jeeney ki
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Old 02-22-2006, 12:54 PM
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Aaj tu aayee hai to pathra gayee hai shikvon ki zbaaN
Kho gyay hain gilon ke bol kahin khalaaon mein
Meetha taanaa sa detaa hai beetee udaasee ka chehra
"Bhool gayaa hai "Sagar" usey vasl ki shuaon mein"


bauhat hi khubsurti sai aap nai manzar kashi ki hai aur jazbai bayaan kiyai hain

bauhat umdah khush rahiyai
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Originally Posted by brijinder1232
Hijr-o-visaal

Fazaon ko phir vajeh si mil gayee mahakane ki
Afsurda badalon mein se chand phir muskuraya hai
Takhleeq meri mein phir aaney lagey hain shokhion ke dum
Labon pe phir koyee mast nagma ubhar aayaa hai

Phir se gaataa hai malhaar saaz-e-zeest mera
Phir se chayee hai takh_ ul pe aarzuon ke ghata
Jhumti bal khaati hai barq umeedon ki
Phir se wafa ki zard aarizo mein noor bhaa

Meri tanhaee bhi soyee hai aaj umron ke baad
Main bhi khud se mila huin baad muddat ke
Dard ki aankhon mein bhi hein aaj massrrat ke aansoo
Tamanna ko milay phir se pairhan haqeeqat ke

Besood nahin mahabbat ki wus_ ataiN
Dil phir yeh mananay ko karta hai
Khird phir bebus si khari hai
Junoon phir jaagney ko karta hai

Aaj tu aayee hai to pathra gayee hai shikvon ki zbaaN
Kho gyay hain gilon ke bol kahin khalaaon mein
Meetha taanaa sa detaa hai beetee udaasee ka chehra
"Bhool gayaa hai "Sagar" usey vasl ki shuaon mein"

Abhi kuch pal mein toot jayega waqt-e-vasl ka dum
Phir se laut jayengey hum liye majboorion ke daaman
Tu meri ho ke bhi meri na hogi kabhi
Teri majboorian hain yeh duniya ke bemaar aqayud
Main bhi majboor huun in haalaat ke haathon humnufs meri
Aatee rhaa karo milnay jab talak mumkin hai
Kyuon na tab talaq ishq ko apnay
vajah miltee rahey jeeney ki
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