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~*~ koie apnaa nahin zamaanay main ~*~

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Old 11-19-2005, 07:46 PM
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bohat din ba'ad ap dostoN ki mehfil main hazir huwa hoon aik ghazal lay kar...

din abhi kuch yahan bitaanay hain
phir yeh sunay mehal jalanay hain
aa'ina kaab dikhaayega chehra?
aur kitnay naqaab uthanay hain?
koun say zakham ab haray hongay?
kaun say khuwab ab bhulanay hain?
shaakh kanton bhari to hai lekin
gul kisi din tu iss pay aanay hain
koie apnaa nahin zamaanay main
aftab yeh bhi kya zamanay hain

khush rahiye @};-
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Old 11-19-2005, 07:58 PM
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koie apnaa nahin zamaanay main
aftab yeh bhi kya zamanay hain


Bohot khoob dear...

Achi ghuzul hai....keep it up
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Old 11-19-2005, 08:20 PM
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w/salam.

bohat khooooob ghazal likhi hai aapne aftab...its really superb....@};-

shaakh kanton bhari to hai lekin
gul kisi din tu iss pay aanay hain

wahhhh....

khush rahiye
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din abhi kuch yahan bitaanay hain
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wah bohat khobsorat ghazal hai Aftab bhai .......3

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Old 11-20-2005, 07:38 AM
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umdaah ashar kahay janaab.... baad'muddat ke mehfil main apki amaad se khushii hui...likhte rhaeye...

khush raheye......@};-
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Old 11-20-2005, 11:57 AM
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shaakh kanton bhari to hai lekin
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aftab yeh bhi kya zamanay hain


boht khoob likha aftab3
khush raho sada ameen sum ameen
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koie apnaa nahin zamaanay main
aftab yeh bhi kya zamanay hain


Bohot khoob dear...

Achi ghuzul hai....keep it up

Buhat shukriya Aas ...

khush rahoo
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w/salam.

bohat khooooob ghazal likhi hai aapne aftab...its really superb....@};-

shaakh kanton bhari to hai lekin
gul kisi din tu iss pay aanay hain

wahhhh....

khush rahiye
buhat shukriya Mehroo .....@};-

buhat khush rahoo
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