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This is a discussion on ~*~ koie apnaa nahin zamaanay main ~*~ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; bohat din ba'ad ap dostoN ki mehfil main hazir huwa hoon aik ghazal lay kar... din abhi kuch yahan bitaanay ...
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![]() bohat din ba'ad ap dostoN ki mehfil main hazir huwa hoon aik ghazal lay kar... din abhi kuch yahan bitaanay hain phir yeh sunay mehal jalanay hain aa'ina kaab dikhaayega chehra? aur kitnay naqaab uthanay hain? koun say zakham ab haray hongay? kaun say khuwab ab bhulanay hain? shaakh kanton bhari to hai lekin gul kisi din tu iss pay aanay hain koie apnaa nahin zamaanay main aftab yeh bhi kya zamanay hain khush rahiye @};-
__________________ ![]() Shayad Yai Taqabor Ki Saza Mujh Ko Meli Hai Bari Shaan Sai Ubhra Tha Ab Doob Raha HoN Last edited by ghurob-e-aftab; 11-19-2005 at 08:13 PM. |
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#2
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| koie apnaa nahin zamaanay main aftab yeh bhi kya zamanay hain Bohot khoob dear... ![]() Achi ghuzul hai....keep it up ![]()
__________________ A heart in pain longs for rain a heart asks for no shrine No heavens divine but for a heart that's mine |
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#3
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| w/salam. bohat khooooob ghazal likhi hai aapne aftab...its really superb....@};- shaakh kanton bhari to hai lekin gul kisi din tu iss pay aanay hain wahhhh.... khush rahiye
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#4
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| din abhi kuch yahan bitaanay hain phir yeh sunay mehal jalanay hain aa'ina kaab dikhaayega chehra? aur kitnay naqaab uthanay hain? wah bohat khobsorat ghazal hai Aftab bhai ....... 3 @};-
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#5
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| umdaah ashar kahay janaab.... baad'muddat ke mehfil main apki amaad se khushii hui...likhte rhaeye... ![]() khush raheye......@};-
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| shaakh kanton bhari to hai lekin gul kisi din tu iss pay aanay hain koie apnaa nahin zamaanay main aftab yeh bhi kya zamanay hain boht khoob likha aftab 3 khush raho sada ameen sum ameen ![]()
__________________ mujhe mitti bulati hai bara dil ko rulati hai |
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#7
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Buhat shukriya Aas ... khush rahoo ![]() |
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#8
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buhat khush rahoo ![]() |