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Old 07-28-2008, 06:13 AM
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Aslam o alikum,

yeh mere apni gazal ha jisko design b maiany khud kia ha,

apsay gazal k baray main aara leni thin,
k yeh kese likhi gai ha
dosray misay ka pehla lafz "silsila" ha,
typing mistake ho gai,
jo mujhay ab nazar aai ha adangle

waslam,

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bahot achi koshish hai likhtey rahiye, ghaltiyan bhi theek hoti jayein gi nikhar bhi aata jaye ga
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bahot achi koshish hai likhtey rahiye, ghaltiyan bhi theek hoti jayein gi nikhar bhi aata jaye ga
kitna formal bol rahay ho,
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wa salam

bahut achi koshish hia...
maqtey me kuch garbar laging me ko... or wazan me thora masla hia.. lekin koshish jari rakhen...inshAllah waqt k sath sab sahi ho jaye ga...
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wa salam

bahut achi koshish hia...
maqtey me kuch garbar laging me ko... or wazan me thora masla hia.. lekin koshish jari rakhen...inshAllah waqt k sath sab sahi ho jaye ga...
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wa salam

bahut achi koshish hia...
maqtey me kuch garbar laging me ko... or wazan me thora masla hia.. lekin koshish jari rakhen...inshAllah waqt k sath sab sahi ho jaye ga...
thank you bhai for these comments....
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nice one and designg is also nice
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