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<!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 02:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 02:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 04:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 04:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 02:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 02:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 04:20 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 04:20 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 02:17 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 02:17 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 04:13 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 04:13 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 02:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 02:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 03:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 03:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 01:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 01:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 03:33 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 03:33 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->

Wah Wah !!!!!!!!!

Waise mera likha howa aik kind of Qitta hai.......
iss k jawab mein nahi aisay he...
Paish-e-khidmat hai....


Dard ko dil mein dubba k rakhtay hein
Aanson ko aankhuon mein chuppa k rakhtay hein
Jaan na lay koi hamaray dil ka haal
Labo'n per muskurahat Sajja k rakhtay hein
[/b][/quote]
kiya khoob kaha hai, bohut hi zabardast. mein ne apni Shirt aisey hi nahee rakhi thi kuch soch samajh kar hi rakhi thi Madam.
Khush Rahain [/b][/quote]


ShuNkria janab !! tareef da buhut buhut shunKriya !! mera toh seeron k hisab say khoon bharr gaya hai

tabhi toh mein nay aap ko aqalmand honay ka khitaab day diya hai......cozz aap samjhdari ki baatein ker laitay hein ghalti say...
[/b][/quote]
is ghalti ne to kaheen ka nahee chorha.
poetry bohut hi achi thi really, ab mujhey nahee maloom ke apni hai ya ...... [/b][/quote]


Chalein aap ki samjhdaari ko toh mein baad mein discuss karon gi naa , pehlay mein aap say phadda karnay wali hoon woh uss baat per k aap ko yaqeen nahi aa raha hai woh qitta mein nay likha tha ?? /hammer /hammer /hammer /hammer

Aap ko meri qabiliyaton per shak hai ?? /hammer yeh aik aur lein /hammer yeh bhi lein /gun

Mein nay such he kaha tha aaj kal kay zamanay mein heeron ki qadar he nahi karta koi........ /uff
[/b][/quote]
Jitna maar lo ab asar nahee hota. wesey i am sorry ghalti se pooch liya tha bus kiyun ke bohut acha tha is liye doubt hua tha. very nice poetry you have done.
khush rahain [/b][/quote]


Shuker hai aap ko yaqeen aa gaya warna............... ..

Chalein jee shukriya buhut buhut zaida wala ! itna pasand karnay kaa.....
[/b][/quote]
ye yaqeen aap ki maar se nahee aya us se pehley hi a gaya tha, wesey jaan boojh kar phadda karna mujhey pasand hai. [/b][/quote]


Chalein maar say aaya ya jaisay bhi aaya , aaya toh sahih naaaa !!

phadday karnay ki aap ki aadat hai ?? bacho hum say bach ker rahnaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!


oppssss forgot !! asal mein abb ijazat !! neendo aa rahi hai !!
baad mein baqi phadday hotay rahein gay.... yahan per saarhay doh i mean 2:30 ho rahay hein....... hum chaltay hein..........

Bye now........ [/b][/quote]
i know ye neend aap ko yahan ke time ke mutaabiq 3:45 se a rahi hai aur ab yahan 4:35 ho rahey hain. mein aap ki aur Fari khan ke replies parh raha tha is liye maloom hua tha.
Khush rahain
Allah hafiz [/b][/quote]


Haan wohi toh tabb say neendo aa rahi thi , woh chali gayein toh aap say phadday shoro ho gai abb yahan 2:30 ho gai hein, abb chalna he chahiyee...
Baqi baatein baad mein jeee................ ..
Khush rahiyee
Abaad rahiyee
Hameesha muskuratay rahiyee
Fi-amaanillah
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Old 11-29-2003, 07:17 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 04:41 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 04:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 02:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 02:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 04:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 04:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 02:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 02:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 04:20 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 04:20 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 02:17 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 02:17 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 04:13 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 04:13 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 02:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 02:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 03:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 03:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Nov 28 2003, 01:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Nov 28 2003, 01:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Nov 28 2003, 03:33 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Nov 28 2003, 03:33 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->

Wah Wah !!!!!!!!!

Waise mera likha howa aik kind of Qitta hai.......
iss k jawab mein nahi aisay he...
Paish-e-khidmat hai....


Dard ko dil mein dubba k rakhtay hein
Aanson ko aankhuon mein chuppa k rakhtay hein
Jaan na lay koi hamaray dil ka haal
Labo'n per muskurahat Sajja k rakhtay hein
[/b][/quote]
kiya khoob kaha hai, bohut hi zabardast. mein ne apni Shirt aisey hi nahee rakhi thi kuch soch samajh kar hi rakhi thi Madam.
Khush Rahain [/b][/quote]


ShuNkria janab !! tareef da buhut buhut shunKriya !! mera toh seeron k hisab say khoon bharr gaya hai

tabhi toh mein nay aap ko aqalmand honay ka khitaab day diya hai......cozz aap samjhdari ki baatein ker laitay hein ghalti say...
[/b][/quote]
is ghalti ne to kaheen ka nahee chorha.
poetry bohut hi achi thi really, ab mujhey nahee maloom ke apni hai ya ...... [/b][/quote]


Chalein aap ki samjhdaari ko toh mein baad mein discuss karon gi naa , pehlay mein aap say phadda karnay wali hoon woh uss baat per k aap ko yaqeen nahi aa raha hai woh qitta mein nay likha tha ?? /hammer /hammer /hammer /hammer

Aap ko meri qabiliyaton per shak hai ?? /hammer yeh aik aur lein /hammer yeh bhi lein /gun

Mein nay such he kaha tha aaj kal kay zamanay mein heeron ki qadar he nahi karta koi........ /uff
[/b][/quote]
Jitna maar lo ab asar nahee hota. wesey i am sorry ghalti se pooch liya tha bus kiyun ke bohut acha tha is liye doubt hua tha. very nice poetry you have done.
khush rahain [/b][/quote]


Shuker hai aap ko yaqeen aa gaya warna............... ..

Chalein jee shukriya buhut buhut zaida wala ! itna pasand karnay kaa.....
[/b][/quote]
ye yaqeen aap ki maar se nahee aya us se pehley hi a gaya tha, wesey jaan boojh kar phadda karna mujhey pasand hai. [/b][/quote]


Chalein maar say aaya ya jaisay bhi aaya , aaya toh sahih naaaa !!

phadday karnay ki aap ki aadat hai ?? bacho hum say bach ker rahnaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!


oppssss forgot !! asal mein abb ijazat !! neendo aa rahi hai !!
baad mein baqi phadday hotay rahein gay.... yahan per saarhay doh i mean 2:30 ho rahay hein....... hum chaltay hein..........

Bye now........ [/b][/quote]
i know ye neend aap ko yahan ke time ke mutaabiq 3:45 se a rahi hai aur ab yahan 4:35 ho rahey hain. mein aap ki aur Fari khan ke replies parh raha tha is liye maloom hua tha.
Khush rahain
Allah hafiz [/b][/quote]


Haan wohi toh tabb say neendo aa rahi thi , woh chali gayein toh aap say phadday shoro ho gai abb yahan 2:30 ho gai hein, abb chalna he chahiyee...
Baqi baatein baad mein jeee................ ..
Khush rahiyee
Abaad rahiyee
Hameesha muskuratay rahiyee
Fi-amaanillah
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aap bhi abaad raho, muskuraati raho. Ameen
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Sabab Her Ek Mujh Se Poochta Hai Merey Roney Ka
Elahi Saari Duniya Ko Kesey RaazdaaN Kar Loon
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acchi ghazal hai, 2nd aur last sher main kuch kami reh gayi hai.

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