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Koch na rahe baqi

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Old 06-20-2006, 09:35 AM
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Asalam Alaikom,
Ye lejeyee ek naye koshish jante ho koch mistakes to honge......hope you like it.....


Jee chahe etna ro lo aj tere feraq mein
Ke per ankho me koi ashk na rahe baqi
Ek tere nam pe darkte en bejan dadkano mein
Per koi khon ke rawani na rahe baqi
Tujhe pani ke arzo jo he rag rag mein base
Aj ke baad per e jostojo na rahe baqi
Wehshato ke es ghubar mein u gumnam ho dunya mere
kese be dil mein Per es ko basani ke taman na rahe baqi
Mein bekro, tot tot ke fanah hojawo
Dondni par be es dunya mein, mera neshan na rahi baqi
Es shehr e na murad ke galio mein batak jayee tere deeda o taar
Nazar ke pyas bojani ko tere, mere koi be tasweer na rahe baqi
Baad e sabah tumhe sunaye bebase ke mere qesi
Pasheman hoke tu be roye, par tab koch na rahe baqi
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"Es shehr e na murad ke galio mein batak jayee tere deeda e taar"

wah kia bat hy...


achi kawish hy...

Allah aap ko mzeid ata kary....
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Old 06-20-2006, 11:15 AM
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bohhat acha likha aap nay
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Shukria Chilli Milli jee.......and thanks to you too wondering thoughts for liking....khosh raheyee
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bahot achhi koshish hai,daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye.
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Asalam Alaikom,
Ye lejeyee ek naye koshish jante ho koch mistakes to honge......hope you like it.....

Jee chahe etna ro lo aj tere feraq mein
Ke per ankho me koi ashk na rahe baqi
Ek tere nam pe darkte en bejan dadkano mein
Per koi khon ke rawani na rahe baqi
Tujhe pani ke arzo jo he rag rag mein base
Aj ke baad per e jostojo na rahe baqi
Wehshato ke es ghubar mein u gumnam ho dunya mere
kese be dil mein Per es ko basani ke taman na rahe baqi
Mein bekro, tot tot ke fanah hojawo
Dondni par be es dunya mein, mera neshan na rahi baqi
Es shehr e na murad ke galio mein batak jayee tere deeda o taar
Nazar ke pyas bojani ko tere, mere koi be tasweer na rahe baqi
Baad e sabah tumhe sunaye bebase ke mere qesi
Pasheman hoke tu be roye, par tab koch na rahe baqi


Aik bohot hee haseen kaaviSh share kerne per dilii mubaarakbaad qubool keejiay

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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Shukria pasand karne ka......khosh raheyee
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oh God.... plz font size bara karo :cry6
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