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This is a discussion on Kiyoon andheeraa sa zamanee meen huwa jata hee within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; AOA !. FRIENDS AFTER A LONG SILENCE I BACK WITH A NEW GHAZAL. ISHALLAH I HOPE THAT YOU WILL LIKE ...
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| AOA !. FRIENDS AFTER A LONG SILENCE I BACK WITH A NEW GHAZAL. ISHALLAH I HOPE THAT YOU WILL LIKE IT. I WILL WAIT FOR YOUR REPLIES. GHAZAL ----------------- Kiyon andhera sa zamane meen huwa jata hee naam-e-ulfat see har shakhs daraa jataa hee meri har sans oss ke naam see mansoob huwee apnee hathoon jumujhee suli charhaa jata hee jesee yee waqat kattaa, omer bhi katt jayee gi janee kiyoon zakham mera taza huwaa jata hee meen nee jab yaad kiya yad wo ayaa mujh k0 warnaa kis see teri furqat meen rahaa jata hee kuch milee ya na milee kuchaa-e-janaan hee buhoot dill tu dill hee yonhi mayoos huwaa jataa hee ITNAA ASAAN TU NAHI TARK-E-TALUK NAWAZ MUHABATON SEE BHI KABHI JI BHARA JATA HEE WAITING 4 URE REPLIES FARID NAWAZ ADVOCATE 0345-7585613 Last edited by faridnawaz; 09-03-2008 at 08:21 PM. |
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| jesee yee waqat kattaa, omer bhi katt jayee gi janee kiyoon zakham mera taza huwaa jata hee very nice. |
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farid sahib , aap ki gazal nazar nawaz huwi khushi huwi ke aap ne bahot kamiyab koshish ki , mubarikbaad qabool kijiye , gazal ke hawaley se do ik batein main arz karna chahoonga . Kiyon andhera sa zamane meen huwa jata hee naam-e-ulfat see har shakhs daraa jataa hee cani misrey me eak lafz ki kami hai jis se misra be wazn ho gaya hai , issey aap yon kahein , naam_e_ulfat se har ik shaks dara jata hai. dusra sher < meri har sans oss ke naam see mansoob huwee apnee hathoon jumujhee suli charhaa jata hee meri har saan's huwi naam se mansoob ,uskey apne hatho'n jo mujhey suli chad>ha jata hai. sher.3 jesee yee waqat kattaa, omer bhi katt jayee gi janee kiyoon zakham mera taza huwaa jata hee yeh sher theek hai , daad qabool kijiye . meen nee jab yaad kiya yad wo ayaa mujh k0 warnaa kis see teri furqat meen rahaa jata hee iss sher me pahley misra me aap ne ussey woh kah ke yaad kiya , phir aap dusrey misrey me teri kah raheihn hain , yeh shutargurba ka ayeb kahlata hai , iss sher ko phir se kahne ki koshish karein , kuch milee ya na milee kuchaa-e-janaan hee buhoot dill tu dill hee yonhi mayoos huwaa jataa hee cani misrey ko aap yo;n kart dein tou bahot khoob rahe ga dil tou dil hai , yo'n hi pagal sa huwa jata hai. maqta ITNAA ASAAN TU NAHI TARK-E-TALUK NAWAZ MUHABATON SEE BHI KABHI JI BHARA JATA HEE itna aasaa'n tou nahi tark_e_ta_aluq aey nawaz keya ? kabhi ji bhi mahob_bat se bhara jata hai. aap ke chand eak ash_aar be wazn ho gaey they , ab theek hain , aap me acha kahney ki bahot salahiyet nazar aati hai , koshish kartey rahiye , insha allah aap bahot jald khoob se khoob tar kahney lageingey , neyaz mand dilshadnazmi dilshad_nazmi@yahoo. com |
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| thanks dilshad nazmi sahib. aap ne buhoot rehnamai ki |
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| buhut achi koshish hy janab likhty rahiye khush raiye |
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| Good koshish jaari rakhain,,,,,
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