This is a discussion on kissi mehwish se ulfat ho gayi kaya? within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by khaiyaal
Hi Sir Aap Ko Parhne Ko Kum Kum Milte Hain Mugar Jub Bi Milte Hain Maza ...
bahot bahot shukriya Moin bhahi ke ghazal aap ne pasand farmaayi,bahot mamnoon hoon is ke liye,lekin saath hi saath afsos bhi huwa ke aap ne itni saamane ki ghalti ko nazar andaaz kar diya,yehni bahot rasmi andaaz main ghazal ki ta.areef kar di,aap jese ramooz se waaqfiyat rakhne waale aehbaab se mujhe yeh tawaqa naheen thi,
beharhaal.....ghazal pasand karne ka bahot shukriya,
ajji hazoor ....aap ne shaaid sawaaliya nishaan(jo misre ke saath hai) us par ghor naheen kiya,yeh to main aap se pooch raha tha,so aap ko bataana chaahiye ke "mahwish" kon hai,
bahot khush rahiye.
Aik Bouhat Khoobsurat Ghazal Parh Kar Bouhat Acha Laga...Masha Allah Aap Jab Bhi Likhtay Hai'n Bouhat Umda Likhtay Hai'n...Mujhay Is Ghazal Ka Her Shair Ki Bouhat Pasand Aaya...Bouhat Si Daad Qubool Kijiye......Likhta y Rahiye Kay Bouhat Acha Likhtay Hai'n...
bahot bahot shukriya Haya,ke ghazal aap ne pasand farmaai,aor is qadar hosla afzaai farmaai,be had mamnoon hoon is ke liye,
bahot khush rahiye.
kuch tabsra krne ki jasarat krta huN... (agar ghalat huN to wazeh kiji'ay ga aur derguzre kiji'ay ga)
pehli bat to lafz "mewish" ki hy... go k aap already explain kr chuky haiN...
magar mera point kuch or hy...
mery mutabiq is lafz ka asl talafuz Mah'wash hy... (maah+wash) [mah=chand, wash=chehra] meaning chand se chehry wala...
aur dosra point ye hy k aap ne aik qafia istaamal kiya hy "rut".
jab k is ghazal k baqi tmaam qafi'ay (ulfat, adawat, baghawat, rukhsat...) wao pr zabar k sath haiN...
so mery mutabiq ye qafia is ghazal maiN istaamal nahi kiya ja sakta...
wesy is ghazal ki jitni tareef ki ja'ay wo kam ho gi.... bohat be sakhta aur rawani maiN hy ye ghazal...
Allah Mola aap ko aur ata kary...
(waiting for ur reply.)
Faizan Ahmad.
sab se pehle to bahot ma.azarat chaahoon ga ke jawaab likhne main kuchh taakheer ho gayi,wajah kuchh to masroofiyat aor kuchh nasaazi-e-tabiyat rahi,umeed hai mehsoos naheen karain ge,
bahot bahot shukriya Faizan bhahi,na sirf is liye ke aap ne ghazal pasand farmaai,balke is liye bhi ke aap ne ghazal baghor pari,aor us par socha bhi,itna waqt dene ke liye aap ka aehsaan mand hoon,
aap ki pehli baat ka jawaab yeh hai ke ...aap theek samjhe...ke asl lafz waaqayi " maah wash" hi hai,...lekin is ko mukhafaf ki soorat main " mah wash" (meem par zabar+he+wao zabar+sheen) bhi likha jata hai,(matlab wohi hai jo aap ne kaha),roman main likhte waqt main is ke spelling ghalat likh gaya hoon,jis ko aap meri kotaahi,aor laaparwaahi keh sakte hain,
aap ki doosari baat bhi bilkul baja hai,aor mujhe bahot khushi hai ke aap ne akhlaaqi jurat ka muzaahira karte huye is ko poin out kiya,is ke liye aap ka shukar guzaar hoon,..........yeh sher is ghazal ka naheen hai,balke yeh ghazal kehte huye yeh sher ho gaya,(main jaanta tha ke yeh is qaafiya main naheen aata) phir bhi is ko ghazal main shaamil rakha ke dekhna chaahata tha ke kaya is par koyi baat karta hai,ya sabhi rasman ...wah wah...hi karate hain, aor yaqeen maaniye ke bahot khushi huyi ke chalo koyi to hai jo is tarah ki ghaltiyon par nazar rakhta hai, .......umeed hai aainda bhi aap issi tawajah aor lagan se sirf meri hi naheen sabhi doston ki rahnumaai karte rahe ge,
ghazal ki pasandeedagi aor is qadar waqt dene ka aek baar phir be had shukriya,
bahot khush rahiye,dua hai ke ALLAH rab-ul-izzat aap ko mazeed ilm aor istaqaamat inaayat karain.
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08-29-2006, 08:42 AM
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.......umeed hai aainda bhi aap issi tawajah aor lagan se sirf meri hi naheen sabhi doston ki rahnumaai karte rahe ge,
Re: kissi mehwish se ulfat ho gayi kaya? 
Aik Bouhat Khoobsurat Ghazal Parh Kar Bouhat Acha Laga...Masha Allah Aap Jab Bhi Likhtay Hai'n Bouhat Umda Likhtay Hai'n...Mujhay Is Ghazal Ka Her Shair Ki Bouhat Pasand Aaya...Bouhat Si Daad Qubool Kijiye...
