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RulesThis is a discussion on kissi mehwish se ulfat ho gayi kaya? within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by zain ASLAM O ALEKUM, dosto main aek baar phir haazir,aek nayi halki phulki ghazal ke saath, umeed ...
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#11
08-28-2006, 12:40 PM
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kuch tabsra krne ki jasarat krta huN... (agar ghalat huN to wazeh kiji'ay ga aur derguzre kiji'ay ga) pehli bat to lafz "mewish" ki hy... go k aap already explain kr chuky haiN... magar mera point kuch or hy... mery mutabiq is lafz ka asl talafuz Mah'wash hy... (maah+wash) [mah=chand, wash=chehra] meaning chand se chehry wala... aur dosra point ye hy k aap ne aik qafia istaamal kiya hy "rut". jab k is ghazal k baqi tmaam qafi'ay (ulfat, adawat, baghawat, rukhsat...) wao pr zabar k sath haiN... so mery mutabiq ye qafia is ghazal maiN istaamal nahi kiya ja sakta... wesy is ghazal ki jitni tareef ki ja'ay wo kam ho gi.... bohat be sakhta aur rawani maiN hy ye ghazal... Allah Mola aap ko aur ata kary... (waiting for ur reply.) Faizan Ahmad.
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#12
08-28-2006, 05:40 PM
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Waaahhh Khoobsorat Ghazal@};-
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08-28-2006, 06:28 PM
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ji Zain ji aatay hian aap ki ghazal ki taraf pehli baat to yeh kay acchhi koshish hay dusri baat yeh kay kuchh note farm lijay hamin matla pasand nahin aayaa jaisa kay aap ki ghazlon main amuman hota hay kam az kam waisa nahin hay 3rd one main aik mistake yeh kay khizaan rut main to phool hotay hi nahin to ashkbaari kaisi? talazmaa nahin nazar aa rahaa 4rth main <shirin sukhan ho har kisi say> nahin sunaa yeh to tareef kay zumray main aata hay aakri walay main kaf_e_afsos malnay ki wajah bhi samjahaa dain KAFEAFSOS MALTAY ZAIN HO AB LAGI DIL KI QIAMAT HO GAI HAY YANI DIL KI LAGI KAA QIAMAT HONA TO BAHOT ACHHAA HOTA HAY AASHIQ KAY LIYAY JABKAY AAP NAY TO GANGA HI ULTI BAHAA DI KHAIR YEH TO HAMARI RAI HAY JISS SAY AAP KO ZAROOR IKHTILAAF HOGA KYUNKAY SAB HI TAREEFON KAY PUL BANDHAY JAA RAHAY HAIN YAHAAN MERI TANQEED BURI LAGAY GI MAGAR KIA KIAA JAY KAY MAJBOR HOKAY LIKH RAHY HAIN UMMEED HAY TANQEED PER NAARAAZ NAA HONGAY BALKAY MAZEED SOCHAIN GAY AUR ISS SAY ACCHHAA LIKHNAY KI KOSHISH KARAINGAY KAHAA SUNAA PARRHAA MUAAF AAPKA APNA QUILOL |
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08-28-2006, 06:29 PM
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ji Zain ji aatay hian aap ki ghazal ki taraf pehli baat to yeh kay acchhi koshish hay dusri baat yeh kay kuchh note farm lijay hamin matla pasand nahin aayaa jaisa kay aap ki ghazlon main amuman hota hay kam az kam waisa nahin hay 3rd one main aik mistake yeh kay khizaan rut main to phool hotay hi nahin to ashkbaari kaisi? talazmaa nahin nazar aa rahaa 4rth main <shirin sukhan ho har kisi say> nahin sunaa yeh to tareef kay zumray main aata hay aakri walay main kaf_e_afsos malnay ki wajah bhi samjahaa dain KAFEAFSOS MALTAY ZAIN HO AB LAGI DIL KI QIAMAT HO GAI HAY YANI DIL KI LAGI KAA QIAMAT HONA TO BAHOT ACHHAA HOTA HAY AASHIQ KAY LIYAY JABKAY AAP NAY TO GANGA HI ULTI BAHAA DI KHAIR YEH TO HAMARI RAI HAY JISS SAY AAP KO ZAROOR IKHTILAAF HOGA KYUNKAY SAB HI TAREEFON KAY PUL BANDHAY JAA RAHAY HAIN YAHAAN MERI TANQEED BURI LAGAY GI MAGAR KIA KIAA JAY KAY MAJBOR HOKAY LIKH RAHY HAIN UMMEED HAY TANQEED PER NAARAAZ NAA HONGAY BALKAY MAZEED SOCHAIN GAY AUR ISS SAY ACCHHAA LIKHNAY KI KOSHISH KARAINGAY KAHAA SUNAA PARRHAA MUAAF AAPKA APNA QUILL |
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08-28-2006, 06:32 PM
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MashAllah... buhat acha operation kiya hay aap nay... mujhay yaqeen hay k Zain bhai ko ye baat buri nahiN lagay gi.. kioN k hum sub yahaN seekhnay k liye hi jama huway heiN... .aur experts ki raye ki tou hamesha hi zaroorat rehti hay... Buhat khush rahaiN k aap nay itna waqt diya.. Regards.
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08-28-2006, 06:37 PM
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ji Zain ji aatay hian aap ki ghazal ki taraf pehli baat to yeh kay acchhi koshish hay dusri baat yeh kay kuchh note farm lijay hamin matla pasand nahin aayaa jaisa kay aap ki ghazlon main amuman hota hay kam az kam waisa nahin hay 3rd one main aik mistake yeh kay khizaan rut main to phool hotay hi nahin to ashkbaari kaisi? talazmaa nahin nazar aa rahaa 4rth main <shirin sukhan ho har kisi say> nahin sunaa yeh to tareef kay zumray main aata hay aakri walay main kaf_e_afsos malnay ki wajah bhi samjahaa dain KAFEAFSOS MALTAY ZAIN HO AB LAGI DIL KI QIAMAT HO GAI HAY YANI DIL KI LAGI KAA QIAMAT HONA TO BAHOT ACHHAA HOTA HAY AASHIQ KAY LIYAY JABKAY AAP NAY TO GANGA HI ULTI BAHAA DI KHAIR YEH TO HAMARI RAI HAY JISS SAY AAP KO ZAROOR IKHTILAAF HOGA KYUNKAY SAB HI TAREEFON KAY PUL BANDHAY JAA RAHAY HAIN YAHAAN MERI TANQEED BURI LAGAY GI MAGAR KIA KIAA JAY KAY MAJBOR HOKAY LIKH RAHY HAIN UMMEED HAY TANQEED PER NAARAAZ NAA HONGAY BALKAY MAZEED SOCHAIN GAY AUR ISS SAY ACCHHAA LIKHNAY KI KOSHISH KARAINGAY KAHAA SUNAA PARRHAA MUAAF AAPKA APNA QUILOL |
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#17
08-28-2006, 10:19 PM
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wah zain bhai...bohat khoob bohat achi ghazal kahi es baar bhi
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#18
08-29-2006, 08:34 AM
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bahot khush rahiye. 1.gif ")1")
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Re: kissi mehwash se ulfat ho gayi kaya? 
umeed hai ghazal pasand aaye gi,
