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This is a discussion on Kisi Se Kuch Na Kehna within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Jub ghum sataye tou Ankhein bher ayein tou Dil dharak jaye tou Tum khamosh hi rehna Kisi se kuch nahi ...
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#1
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| Jub ghum sataye tou Ankhein bher ayein tou Dil dharak jaye tou Tum khamosh hi rehna Kisi se kuch nahi kehna Jub aas toot jaye tou Umeedein bher na ayein tou Muskane aansoun mein dhel jayein tou Tum khamosh hi rehna Kisi se kuch nahi kehna Jub hud se dard bher jaye tou Koi duwa kaam na aye tou Saas bhi ruk ruk jaye tou Tum khamosh hi rehna Kisi se kuch nahi kehna Jab khamoshi hi kamoshi ho Tanhai hi tanhai ho Udasi rooh mein samayi ho Tum khamosh hi rehna Kisi se kuch nahi kehna Jub begunahi gunah bun jaye tou Bekasoor saza paye tou Sub ilzam tum per aye tou Tum khamosh hi rehna Kisi se kuch nahi kehna Jub ankho mein rait bher jaye tou Dard ki tez dhoop tumhe jalaye tou Kushi ka aik badal bhi nazer na aye tou Tum khamosh hi rehna Kisi se kuch nahi kehna Jab her pal azaab-e-jaan ho Wasal ka koi imkaan na ho Jab hijr se dil behaal ho Tum khamosh hi rehna Kisi se kuch nahi kehna Jub kaanch sa dil toot jaye tou Jub apni siskian kaano se takrayein tou Tum dukho ke ghare mein gir jao tou Tum khamosh hi rehna Kisi se kuch nahi kehna Last edited by Sara Defence; 09-30-2008 at 11:27 AM. |
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#2
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| Aapke jazbaat, Aapke ehsaasaat yaqeenan qaabile daad o tahseen haiN, Sad aafreen! Mujhe mataalib o mafaaheem ke eatibaar se aap ki poetry bohot pasand aai, likheN aour behtar likheN aour ustaad shoaraa ka kalaam is tarah parheN ke us se aap ko kuchh qavaaneen hasil hoN, jinheN aap apni poetry me isteamaal karen. |
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#3
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| bohat shukriya tareef ka ... aur inshAllha app dekhiye ga mein aur acha likhney ki koshish keron gee, aur behtri aye gee....... abhi itna acha likhna tu mujhey nahi ata pur inshAllah behter ho jaye ga .... koshish tu mein kafi kertee hon .... by the way thankyou for making me feel so welcome here if only i knew about this site before... |
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#4
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| very nice................ .................... . |
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#6
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| Aap kay khayalat-o-ehsasat buhat achay hain aur unhain nazm karnay mein aap ki mehnat bhi qabil-e-tehseen hai so daad qabool kijiey. Baqi shairey kay usool aur nukat samjhnay kay liey koshish aur mutalia jaari rakhain. Nazm ki maujooda soorat mein bhi stanza no.5 mein jahan aap nay "jab begunah gunah bun jaey tu" likha hai wahan ya tu "jab begunahi gunah bun jaey tu" ya phir"jab begunah gunahgar bun jaey tu" istemal karain. |
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#7
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| achi kaavish hai, yaad rakhiye likhte rehne se hi nikhaar aae ga. Duago... Zemir.
__________________ is dasht mein jal jal Zameer - e be asar ka Haal ab DhooNDay waheeN per khak-e-dil, paaey jahaaN bhi rakh rakh |
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#8
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| achi grift hay ek topic par , nice keep sharing
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#9
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| Saukhta thank you for correcting. Maine woh edit ker ke "Jub begunahi gunah bun jaye tou" ker diya hai. |
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#10
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| Pasand kerne ka aur daad dene ka bohat bohat shukriya. App sub ko Eid Mubarik. |