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Kis Ki Yaad Aa Gai Nagahan Shehar Mian.......Ruk Gaye Qarb Kye Karwan Shehar Mian.

Kis Kaye Aashiq Hian Iss Be Amman Shehar Mian........Khaima Zun Aag Ke Darmian Shehar Mian.

Koon Hia Wajh-e-Taskeen-e-Jaan Shehar Mian.......Kis Ka Sikka Hia Abb Bhi Rawan Shehar Mian.

Kis Ka Dast-e-Duwa Shehar Ki Dhaal Hia.......Kis Kye Sajdoon Kye Hian Saiybaan Shehar Mian.

Manzilon Ki Tarha Muskarati Hoi......Kis Kye Qadmoon Ki Hia Kehkishaan Shehar Mian...

Kis Kye Ahd-e-Muhabbat Mian Abb Bhi Makkan .....Dye Rehay Hian Azzan Be Azzan Shehar Mian..

Chand Taroon Sye Kunj-e-Qafas Bhar Ghiya....Raat Mehmaan Tha Asmaan Shehar Mian..

Nazish-e-Shehar Tu Shehar Sye Ja Chukka.........Kis LIye Aye Hu Abb Miyan Shehar Mian..

Lee Ghiya Appnye Hamray Sab Roonqian.....Woh Ju Tha Ikk Haseen Nu Jawan Shehar Mian..

Woh Jahan BHi Rehay Muskrata Rehay.....Keh Rahay Hian yeh Khali Makkan Shehar Mian..

Aik Din Aye Ga Muskarata Huwa........Dard Boolian Gaye Ban Kye Zuban Shehar Mian.

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Old 09-25-2007, 12:31 AM
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bohat hi khubsooorat ghazal hai janab... maza aa gaya parh kar... 1 2 jagha shayad typing mistakes haiN... wagarna ghazal bohat umda hai...

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Kis Ki Yaad Aa Gai Nagahan Shehar Mian
Ruk Gaye Qarb Kye Karwan Shehar Mian.

Kis Kaye Aashiq Hian Iss Be Amman Shehar Mian
Khaima Zun Aag Ke Darmian Shehar Mian.

Koon Hia Wajh-e-Taskeen-e-Jaan Shehar Mian
Kis Ka Sikka Hia Abb Bhi Rawan Shehar Mian.

Kis Ka Dast-e-Duwa Shehar Ki Dhaal Hia
Kis Kye Sajdoon Kye Hian Saiybaan Shehar Mian.

Manzilon Ki Tarha Muskarati Hoi
Kis Kye Qadmoon Ki Hia Kehkishaan Shehar Mian...

Kis Kye Ahd-e-Muhabbat Mian Abb Bhi Makkan
Dye Rehay Hian Azzan Be Azzan Shehar Mian..

Chand Taroon Sye Kunj-e-Qafas Bhar Ghiya
Raat Mehmaan Tha Asmaan Shehar Mian..

Nazish-e-Shehar Tu Shehar Sye Ja Chukka
Kis LIye Aye Hu Abb Miyan Shehar Mian..

Lee Ghiya Appnye Hamray Sab Roonqian
Woh Ju Tha Ikk Haseen Nu Jawan Shehar Mian..

Woh Jahan BHi Rehay Muskrata Rehay
Keh Rahay Hian yeh Khali Makkan Shehar Mian..

Aik Din Aye Ga Muskarata Huwa
Dard Boolian Gaye Ban Kye Zuban Shehar Mian.
baei wah Jnab, aik aur umda ghazal se nawaza aap ne... kya khoob taba aazmaei ki hy ap ne is zamen meiN... lutf hi aa gya,... bohat khoob.... sabhi asha'ar bohat achy haiN, so meri janib se dheroN daad is qadar achi ghazal ki nazr... likhty raheN , aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary....

3rd shair mein mujhy aik lafz paRhny meiN dushwari ho rahi hy , ager ap meri correction kr deN to mamnun huN ga, 3rd last shair k 2nd misry meiN lafz "hamraah" likhna chaha hy na ap ne...???
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Kis Ki Yaad Aa Gai Nagahan Shehar Mian.......Ruk Gaye Qarb Kye Karwan Shehar Mian.

Kis Kaye Aashiq Hian Iss Be Amman Shehar Mian........Khaima Zun Aag Ke Darmian Shehar Mian.

Koon Hia Wajh-e-Taskeen-e-Jaan Shehar Mian.......Kis Ka Sikka Hia Abb Bhi Rawan Shehar Mian.

Kis Ka Dast-e-Duwa Shehar Ki Dhaal Hia.......Kis Kye Sajdoon Kye Hian Saiybaan Shehar Mian.

Manzilon Ki Tarha Muskarati Hoi......Kis Kye Qadmoon Ki Hia Kehkishaan Shehar Mian...

Kis Kye Ahd-e-Muhabbat Mian Abb Bhi Makkan .....Dye Rehay Hian Azzan Be Azzan Shehar Mian..

Chand Taroon Sye Kunj-e-Qafas Bhar Ghiya....Raat Mehmaan Tha Asmaan Shehar Mian..

Nazish-e-Shehar Tu Shehar Sye Ja Chukka.........Kis LIye Aye Hu Abb Miyan Shehar Mian..

Lee Ghiya Appnye Hamray Sab Roonqian.....Woh Ju Tha Ikk Haseen Nu Jawan Shehar Mian..

Woh Jahan BHi Rehay Muskrata Rehay.....Keh Rahay Hian yeh Khali Makkan Shehar Mian..

Aik Din Aye Ga Muskarata Huwa........Dard Boolian Gaye Ban Kye Zuban Shehar Mian.
adaab,
aap ne bahout zarf ka muzahira karte huwe muje ache mashwre se nawaza jis ke liye mashkoor houn......ab aap aisa kareen ke yeh ghazal jo aap ne share ki hai is ke saath doosri ghazal ko rakh ke zara un ilfaaz .. un ki mahniwiyat aur istahmaal ka andaaza lagayeen aap ko khud mehsoos ho ga ke mein ne kya kaha tha........

aap ne bahout khubsoorat ghazal ka inyekhaab kiya hai yeh ramz ki bahout mashoor ghazal hai

bijliyaan kondati hain mere bagh par aandhiyaan chal rahi hain mere sheer mein
ramz cheeri hai tu ne ghazal be mahal yeh to waqt e azaan hein mere sheer mein

mere aziz.... mera waqt itna fuzool nahin ke mein aap ke kalaam pe apna jazbaat ka izhaar kar ke aap ko khamkhwah naraaz karta rahoon.... yeh to urdu adab se meri muhabat ka saboot tha ke mein ne kaanch ki mehroo aur faizan ke kehne pe yeh taklif dah farz apne zime liye tha mein yeh janta houn ke is kaam se koi khush nahin hota ham sab loog jhooti wah wah ke aadi ho chuke hain aur sachai bardasht nahin kar sakte ... bajayee is ke .ke aap meri baat pe tawajo dee ke apne ashaar ko deekhte aap ne farmaya ke sab ko taklif poonchti hai mere likhne se to lijiyee aap ki zaat ki waja se mera kaam bi khatam hota lekon agar aap likhte rahe to zindagi ke kissi na kissi moor pe aap ko mere jaise kissi talkh aadmi ki zaroorat pare gi jo aap ka dil toore aap ke jazbaat ko thees ponchayee aur aap ki ghaltiyoon ko sahi kare....aaj ke baad mein kissi ko koi mashwra nahin doonga na tanqid ho gi...... mein eik alehda thread mein bi bheej raha houn..
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I realy wasn't know about you, Now it looks that you are elder than me, and i realy respect Elders.
I Am really very sorroy if i hurt your feelings but do have a look on ur comments. Its not TANQEED That was a Joke you made......( Which will surly hurt any poet )

Phir bhi mughay pata hia mian app ki shaan mian kuch galat hi keh ghiya.....So apna Samagh kye Muaaf Kar di Jiye Gha.....Ore rehi Baat Kuch na post karnye ki tu meri jaan app tu buhat Experiance Lagtaye hian inn chooti mooti batoon ki Parwah " NAQQAAD" Kahan kiya kartaye hian................ .....
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Wondering thoughts you are abslutly right " Its a typing mistake...Thanks for Correction.......... ...........

Ore Saab Loogoon Ka Buhat Buhat Shukria Sarahnye Ka........App Sab Ki Muhabbatian Hian Kye Mian aik ore Ghazal ju abhi complete nahi hia Share kar raha hoon.... In A nEw Thread
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Kis ka dast-e-dua shehr ki dhaal hai
Kis ke sajdon ke hain sayban shehr main

Wah...kia kehne hain...bohot umda...janab-e-aali...I must say....aap PC main behtreen izafa hain...ek mukammal, munfarid aur mukhtalif shaire jis ke paas khayal bhi hai, alfaaz bhi hain aur khubsoorat andaz-e-bayan bhi hai...mashaAllah.... Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziada
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Woh Jahan BHi Rehay Muskrata Rehay
Keh Rahay Hian yeh Khali Makkan Shehar Mian..
wahhh...bohat khoob aap ko pehli baar parha acha laga
iss mehfil main dili...Khush Aamdeed....
bohat khush rahin i