Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-TUNHAYE+Jul 26 2003, 07:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (TUNHAYE @ Jul 26 2003, 07:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> /flower Buhut he achi hai Madam Jee.... /flower [/b][/quote]
thanx madam jiii........... /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-kanwal_81+Jul 26 2003, 05:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kanwal_81 @ Jul 26 2003, 05:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Kion apni talab main koi taseer na utri
Kab rabta ham dil ka dua tak nahi karte

Wo konse dil hain jo mohabat ke amee-n hain
Gar toot bhi jain to gila tak nahi karte

Tufa-n main doob jate hain khamoshio-n ke sath
Koi hath na de ham bhi sada tak nahi karte

Ab lout chalai-n wo bhi kaheen rah main hoga
Ye sisila taveel ,saza tak nahi karte

Jin rasto-n pe naqsh hon auro-n ke qadam ke
Ham aise rasto-n pe ruka tak nahi karte

UNKO BHI AASMA-N KE SITARE NAHI MILTE
AURO-N KI RAT MAIN JO DIYA TAK NAHI KARTE

Umeed ki aankho-n main abhi zindagi si he
Ham rabta diye ka saba tak nahi karte

Wo qeemti honge jo tah-e-khak khile hain
Duniya ke jinhai-n hath chua tak nahi karte

Zakhmo-n ke indemal par wo lout na jae
Ham iss lie zkhmo-n ko siya tak nahi karte

YE WASF BHI MAKHSOOS HE JHEELO-N KE KANWAL MAIN
MARKAZ SE BICHAD KE WO JIYA TAK NAHI KARTE………..!

by; kanwal shahab ahmad. /flower [/b][/quote]
mohtarma adab,
Mashallah aap ni bhoot acha likha... aap ki koshish bhoot achi hi.. isi tarah mazeed khoshish karti rahain..aur han behar ka khial rakya ga...umeed hi ki aur bi achi achi likhayee peesh karain gi..

dua go
Syed Mohsin Shah

Bohot Achhay Kanwal behan...
Really Nice Ghazal.............. ...
Thanx for sharing and keep sharing....
/flowers

@};- /good beautiful gazal kanwal ..

<!--QuoteBegin-nishow+Jul 28 2003, 01:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (nishow @ Jul 28 2003, 01:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-kanwal_81+Jul 26 2003, 05:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kanwal_81 @ Jul 26 2003, 05:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Kion apni talab main koi taseer na utri
Kab rabta ham dil ka dua tak nahi karte

Wo konse dil hain jo mohabat ke amee-n hain
Gar toot bhi jain to gila tak nahi karte

Tufa-n main doob jate hain khamoshio-n ke sath
Koi hath na de ham bhi sada tak nahi karte

Ab lout chalai-n wo bhi kaheen rah main hoga
Ye sisila taveel ,saza tak nahi karte

Jin rasto-n pe naqsh&nbsp; hon auro-n ke qadam ke
Ham aise rasto-n pe ruka tak nahi karte

UNKO&nbsp; BHI&nbsp; AASMA-N&nbsp; KE&nbsp; SITARE&nbsp; NAHI&nbsp; MILTE
AURO-N&nbsp; KI&nbsp; RAT&nbsp; MAIN&nbsp; JO&nbsp; DIYA&nbsp; TAK&nbsp; NAHI&nbsp; KARTE

Umeed ki aankho-n main abhi zindagi si he
Ham rabta diye ka saba tak nahi karte

Wo qeemti honge jo tah-e-khak khile hain
Duniya ke jinhai-n hath chua tak nahi karte

Zakhmo-n ke indemal par wo lout na jae
Ham iss lie zkhmo-n ko siya tak nahi karte

YE&nbsp; WASF&nbsp; BHI&nbsp; MAKHSOOS&nbsp; HE&nbsp; JHEELO-N&nbsp; KE&nbsp; KANWAL&nbsp; MAIN
MARKAZ&nbsp; SE&nbsp; BICHAD&nbsp; KE&nbsp; WO&nbsp; JIYA&nbsp; TAK&nbsp; NAHI&nbsp; KARTE………..!

by; kanwal shahab ahmad. /flower [/b][/quote]
mohtarma adab,
Mashallah aap ni bhoot acha likha... aap ki koshish bhoot achi hi.. isi tarah mazeed khoshish karti rahain..aur han behar ka khial rakya ga...umeed hi ki aur bi achi achi likhayee peesh karain gi..

dua go
Syed Mohsin Shah [/b][/quote]
thanx ji aur zaror koshish karainge aap ki rae qabil-e-ahtaram he. /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-Hashim Raza+Jul 28 2003, 03:25 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Hashim Raza @ Jul 28 2003, 03:25 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Bohot Achhay Kanwal behan...
Really Nice Ghazal.............. ...
Thanx for sharing and keep sharing....
/flowers

[/b][/quote]
THANK U HASHIM BHAI................ .... /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 28 2003, 04:20 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 28 2003, 04:20 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> YE WASF BHI MAKHSOOS HE JHEELO-N KE KANWAL MAIN
MARKAZ SE BICHAD KE WO JIYA TAK NAHI KARTE………..!


bohat hi khoobsoorat ghazal hai kanwal.... [/b][/quote]
thank uuu /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-KinaRa+Jul 28 2003, 06:59 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (KinaRa @ Jul 28 2003, 06:59 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> @};- /good beautiful gazal kanwal .. [/b][/quote]
thanx jii /flower

salaam
v nice yar kanwal as usual vv sweet gazal
keep writing
Allah hafiz