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RulesThis is a discussion on Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; salaam Noor saaHiba, mizaaj-e-giraamii kaise haiN? ummeed hai k ba_Khair hoNge. aapkii yeh Haseen o dil-kash Ghazal nazar nawaaz huii. ...
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#21
01-29-2007, 07:35 AM
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salaam Noor saaHiba, mizaaj-e-giraamii kaise haiN? ummeed hai k ba_Khair hoNge. aapkii yeh Haseen o dil-kash Ghazal nazar nawaaz huii. majmoo'ii taur par aapkii Ghazal ek achchhi aur kaamiiyaab Ghazal hai jis meN parvaaz-e-murGh-e-taKhaiyul kaafii baland hai par andaaz-e-zabaan o bayaan zaraa Khaam rah gayaa. ummeed hai k merii nukta-chiinii se aap dil-bardaashta nahiiN hoNgii. aapkii Ghazal kii madHa-saraaii yaqeenan waajib hai isii liye maiN ne yeh sutoor qalam-band kiye. shukria. mujhe yeh ash'aar bahot pasand aaye: matl'a, ash'aar numbarii 2, 5 aur maqt'a deegar ash'aar bhii bahot achchhe haiN magar baalaa-zel ash'aar nisbatan mujhe ziyaada pasand aaye _______Hashmat Usmanii
__________________ Khayaal hogaa, junuun hogaa, bahot abhii dil kaa Khoon hogaa bahaar hai door kii Haqeeqat, bahaar rang-e-chaman nahiiN hai Ali Z. Usmani [mere vaalid marHoom]                  |
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#22
01-29-2007, 02:33 PM
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[quote=Baaboo Babooshkaa;2890567]salaam Noor saaHiba, mizaaj-e-giraamii kaise haiN? ummeed hai k ba_Khair hoNge. aapkii yeh Haseen o dil-kash Ghazal nazar nawaaz huii. majmoo'ii taur par aapkii Ghazal ek achchhi aur kaamiiyaab Ghazal hai jis meN parvaaz-e-murGh-e-taKhaiyul kaafii baland hai par andaaz-e-zabaan o bayaan zaraa Khaam rah gayaa. ummeed hai k merii nukta-chiinii se aap dil-bardaashta nahiiN hoNgii. aapkii Ghazal kii madHa-saraaii yaqeenan waajib hai isii liye maiN ne yeh sutoor qalam-band kiye. shukria. mujhe yeh ash'aar bahot pasand aaye: matl'a, ash'aar numbarii 2, 5 aur maqt'a deegar ash'aar bhii bahot achchhe haiN magar baalaa-zel ash'aar nisbatan mujhe ziyaada pasand aaye _______Hashmat Usmanii[ nuktachini main hi to rehnumai hoti hai bashart yeh ke khuloose dil se ki jaey..so nuktachini zaroor kijiye.waise is main jo kuchh aap ko pasand aya uske liye shukriya Last edited by Noor-al-sabah; 01-29-2007 at 02:48 PM. |
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01-31-2007, 08:02 AM
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Salam Noor, App ki Ghazal bohat acchi lagi, lambi behron par girift rakhna khasa mushkil kaam hota hai app nay bakhoobi nibhaya hai, waisay to poori ghazal hi bohat achi lagi laikin matla aur maqta bohat accha laga. Raza
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02-01-2007, 02:31 PM
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aap ne jo hausla afzai ki hai uske liye aap ka shukriya ada karti hun.is tarah aur behter likhne ki targheeb milti hai. |
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05-08-2007, 11:25 AM
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very nice 1.gif ")1")
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