It seems that you are unregistered. Please register with us by clicking Here, or if you are already registered login here
User Name: Password:
Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum

Urdu Poetry Forum

Welcome to Urdu Community & Poetry/Shayari Forum

 


Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai

This is a discussion on Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; vvvv nice impresive thoughts buhat achi lagi apki kavish. wish u all the best noor...


Go Back   Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum > Urdu Poetry > Urdu Poet Club

Reload this Page Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai

Video Photo Books Games Sites Register Groups FAQ Calendar Mark Forums Read Chat [6]

Notices

Download/Upload Islamic Images

Sourat e Namal Asma e Hasna Hadith e Mubarka Images Islamic Place - Makka Madina Kaaba Images of Islamic Calligraphy

Designed Urdu Poetry Images

Designed Urdu Poetry / Shayari Ashaar Designed Ghazal Images - urdu poetry shayari Designed Nazm/Poem - Urdu Poetry Shayari Designed Urdu Poetry Shayari of Famous Indian & Pakistani Poets Designed Urdu Poetry by HallaGulla Designers

 

Latest Topics @ Urdu Poetry Forum

Sad Urdu Poetry WINNER (NOV08)

Tarahi Ghazal VOTING (NOV08)

Funny Poetry WINNER (NOV08)

Islamic Wallpaper VOTING (Hajj 1429H)

This Week's Friend  BOLTON GB

Eid-ul-Ad'ha '08 Ecards Contest

Eid-ul-Ad'ha '08 Kitchen

Islamic Art WINNER (Zulquada)

Love Express Share Poetry

Word of the week Bahaar Khat

Card on Demand EID Special (NOV08)

 

Play Online Games ( 2000+ NEW GAMES )

Marble Motion - Play Free Flash Game Mah Jongg Solitaire - Play Free Flash Game Crazy Coins - Play Free Flash Game Drive and Dodge - Play Free Flash Game Ms Pacman - Play Free Flash Game

Watch & Share Vidoes

Tafseer of the Holy Quran (Surah Al- Fateha) Noshi Gilanis PTV Ratgaye interview of 2006 Video of Beautiful Pakistan - Northern Pakistan The Top Ten Weird Dismissals Of Cricket Capital Talk - Aitzaz Ahsan and Justice Qayum

 

Rate This Thread - Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai.
(0)
Thread Rating: 0 votes, average.

Reply
Page 2 of 3 < 1 2 3 >
 
Thread Tools
  #11  
Old 01-26-2007, 03:36 PM
shazlay's Avatar
Senior Members
  
Join Date: Oct 2006
Age: 24
Posts: 1,573

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 2
Thanked 14 Times in 10 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 627
shazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond reputeshazlay has a reputation beyond repute
Default Re: Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai
permalink
vvvv nice impresive thoughts buhat achi lagi apki kavish.
wish u all the best noor
__________________
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 01-26-2007, 07:10 PM
kanch ki mehroo's Avatar
Jheel si aankhaiN
  
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Jheel kinaaray
Posts: 21,136

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 223
Thanked 117 Times in 104 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 3694
kanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond reputekanch ki mehroo has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Writer of the Month Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 2
Default Re: Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai
permalink
bohat khooob....dilkash aur umda ghazal kahi Noor...dad qubool karo...aur aisay hi likhto raho ke bohat khob likhti ho...
__________________
Signature Removed - Image exceeds 650 px by 350 px
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 01-26-2007, 09:17 PM
rida jabeen's Avatar
Star Members
  
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 1,394

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 130
rida jabeen is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai
permalink
Quote:
Originally Posted by Noor-al-sabah View Post
shukriya aap ne ise pasand kiya.aur ab jaisa ke aap ne kaha hai urdu main likha hai.
ji ji mujhe yaad hai main ne aap se aap ki shairi ko in page main
likhne ki farmaish ki thi be had shukriya k aap ne meri khohaish
aur meri baat ko itna mana thnx janaba ab maza aya na
aap ki shairi parhne ka
__________________

Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 01-27-2007, 10:57 AM
WanderingThoughts's Avatar
Just Kidding
  
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Islamabad
Posts: 7,242

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 1,636
Thanked 670 Times in 484 Posts
Nominated 25 Times in 13 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 1821
WanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Re: Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai
permalink
Quote:
Originally Posted by Noor-al-sabah View Post
bai wah Noor Sahiba... bohat khoob ghazal share ki aap ne...

akser jiwan bhr k rishty do pal mai mit jaty haiN,
aur kisi ne do pal mil k kabhi na dil se jana hy...

bai bohat khoob sher hy...

ghazal ka aakhri sher bhi bohat khoob raha....

albat'ta teesry sher k misra-e-sani maiN kuch wazn ki kami hy... (taqtee krtay waqt aik rukan kam lagta hy...) plz isy dobara check kr leN....

over all aik bohat achi ghazal sher krny pr dheroN daad hazir hy...

Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary....
__________________

-------------------------------------------------
Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha
aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya...

(Bedil Haidri)
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 01-27-2007, 11:41 AM
Noor-al-sabah's Avatar
Member
  
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 6,540

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 231
Thanked 573 Times in 347 Posts
Nominated 5 Times in 4 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 2017
Noor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Writer of the Month Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 2
Default Re: Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai
permalink


Teesre sher ka misra sani kuchh yun hai



"phir bhi kyun har bar lage hai yeh rasta anjana hai"


yahan per lafz "hai" rehgaya ghalti se.ise wahan likh dungi.

aap ki shkrguzar hun jo apne us taraf tawajjah karwai.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #16  
Old 01-27-2007, 02:35 PM
saahir's Avatar
Senior Members
  
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 1,007

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 427
saahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond reputesaahir has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Writer of the Month Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 2
Default Re: Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai
permalink
waah kiya kahnay hain....itni taiz raftaari say taraqqi krtay hoaiy sha,ir to main ny boht kam hi daikhay hain

aansoon k qatron say dil ki aag kahan buhti hay noor
jalti barish ki bondon nay or isay bharkana hay

wah noor ....dili dua hy k yoonhi likhti raho
Last edited by saahir; 01-27-2007 at 02:38 PM.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #17  
Old 01-27-2007, 02:44 PM
Noor-al-sabah's Avatar
Member
  
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 6,540

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 231
Thanked 573 Times in 347 Posts
Nominated 5 Times in 4 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 2017
Noor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond reputeNoor-al-sabah has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Writer of the Month Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 2
Default Re: Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai
permalink
Quote:
Originally Posted by saahir View Post
waah kiya kahnay hain....itni taiz raftaari say taraqqi krtay hoaiy sha,ir to main ny boht kam hi daikhay hain

aansoon k qatron say dil ki aag kahan buhti hay noor
jalti barish ki bondon nay or isay bharkana hay

wah noor ....dili dua hy k yoonhi likhti raho
bas yeh shoq hi hai jo kahin rukne nahin deta.aap sab padhte hain to

bahut hausla afazai hoti hai aur achha likhne ki targheeb milti hai.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #18  
Old 01-27-2007, 10:20 PM
WanderingThoughts's Avatar
Just Kidding
  
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Islamabad
Posts: 7,242

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 1,636
Thanked 670 Times in 484 Posts
Nominated 25 Times in 13 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 1821
WanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond reputeWanderingThoughts has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Re: Kin lafo-n ki dastak se band tera dar khulwana hai
permalink