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Kia Zamaanay ko bhalaa dooN maiN nishaani apni

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Old 08-08-2006, 07:59 PM
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Dear Friends Assalaam o Alaikum!
Kehiyay kaise mizaaj haiN?
Aaj aik baar phir aap ki khidmat maiN aik Ghazal lay kar Haazir hooN. Ummeed he k aap ko hasb-e-saabiq pasand aaay gi. Mujhay aap ki raay ka shiddat se intizaar Rahay gaa. Hanstay rehiyay. Muskuratay Rehiyay. :(flowers)

Ghazal

Kia zamaanay ko bhalaa dooN maiN nishaani apni
Sath e qirtaas pe utri na kahaani apni.

Dil o daryaa maiN koii rabt jo paayaa jaataa
AaNkh bhar daikhtay phir hum bhi rawaani apni.

Khaak honay ka hunar yooN hi naheeN aayaa he
Hum ne ik umr talak khaak he chhaani apni.

Kiaa wahaaN ab bhi muhabbat ke kaNwal khiltay haiN?
Guzra kartii thi jahaaN shaam suhaani apni.

Aag paani ko milaatay huay baaham hum ko
Khaak maiN aa hi gaii khaak milaani apni.

Jab hawaa ne hamaiN mismaar kiaa to ashraf
Rait se paR gai deewaar uThaani apni.

Ashraf Naqvi
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lekin ghazal kahaan hai Ashraf bhahi,
Ghazal Haazir he janaab!
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kihder hay ghazal? 3
Idhar he Ghazal! AAii nazar?
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buhat zabardast Ashraf bhai.. dil khush ker diya aap nay...

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wah!!!!
zabardast Ashraf bhahi,bahot hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne hanesha ki tarah,dheron daad is khoobsurat ghazal ki naza,

4th sher ke misra-e-saani main ...THI....ki bajaaye aap ..bhi...likh gaye hain,us ko aek nazar dekh lijiye,
bahot khush rahiye.
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Dear Friends Assalaam o Alaikum!
Kehiyay kaise mizaaj haiN?
Aaj aik baar phir aap ki khidmat maiN aik Ghazal lay kar Haazir hooN. Ummeed he k aap ko hasb-e-saabiq pasand aaay gi. Mujhay aap ki raay ka shiddat se intizaar Rahay gaa. Hanstay rehiyay. Muskuratay Rehiyay. :(flowers)

Ghazal

Kia zamaanay ko bhalaa dooN maiN nishaani apni
Sath e qirtaas pe utri na kahaani apni.

Dil o daryaa maiN koii rabt jo paayaa jaataa
AaNkh bhar daikhtay phir hum bhi rawaani apni.

Khaak honay ka hunar yooN hi naheeN aayaa he
Hum ne ik umr talak khaak he chhaani apni.

Kiaa wahaaN ab bhi muhabbat ke kaNwal khiltay haiN?
Guzra kartii bhi jahaaN shaam suhaani apni.

Aag paani ko milaatay huay baaham hum ko
Khaak maiN aa hi gaii khaak milaani apni.

Jab hawaa ne hamaiN mismaar kiaa to ashraf
Rait se paR gai deewaar uThaani apni.

Ashraf Naqvi

AoA!!!
hmm...
aik khubsurat ghazal perhney ko mili...
zabardast....
har share mukamal kahani rakhta hai...
konsey share ki tareef keroon k sab share hi khubsurat hain lekin yeh share tu bohut khubsurat lagey mujhey...

khaak honey ka hunar yunhi nahi aya hai
hum ney ik umar talak khaak hai chani apni

aag pani ko milatey huey bahaam hum ko
khaak main aa hi gaye khaak milani apni

aisey hi likhtey rahen aur share kertey rahen...
tcz b happi alwayz INSHA ALLAH...
AH...
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