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Kia Zamaanay ko bhalaa dooN maiN nishaani apni

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"AaNkh bhar daikhtay phir hum bhi rawaani apni'

wah.. kiya misra hy....

achi lagi aap ki ghazal....

Wish u best of luck....
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bohut achi ghazal hay ashraf bahi ,2nd last misra bohut acha tha
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very nice...........@};-
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Dear Friends Assalaam o Alaikum!
Kehiyay kaise mizaaj haiN?
Aaj aik baar phir aap ki khidmat maiN aik Ghazal lay kar Haazir hooN. Ummeed he k aap ko hasb-e-saabiq pasand aaay gi. Mujhay aap ki raay ka shiddat se intizaar Rahay gaa. Hanstay rehiyay. Muskuratay Rehiyay. :(flowers)

Ghazal

Kia zamaanay ko bhalaa dooN maiN nishaani apni
Sath e qirtaas pe utri na kahaani apni.

Dil o daryaa maiN koii rabt jo paayaa jaataa
AaNkh bhar daikhtay phir hum bhi rawaani apni.

Khaak honay ka hunar yooN hi naheeN aayaa he
Hum ne ik umr talak khaak he chhaani apni.

Kiaa wahaaN ab bhi muhabbat ke kaNwal khiltay haiN?
Guzra kartii thi jahaaN shaam suhaani apni.

Aag paani ko milaatay huay baaham hum ko
Khaak maiN aa hi gaii khaak milaani apni.

Jab hawaa ne hamaiN mismaar kiaa to ashraf
Rait se paR gai deewaar uThaani apni.

Ashraf Naqvi
wah wah wah................b ohat khooburat ghazal kahi aap nay.........
tareef k liyee alfaaz nahi mil rahay ...itni pasand aeee.......
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Waah Achii Ghazal Kahi @};-
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Old 08-12-2006, 08:14 PM
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Originally Posted by Aik Lamha View Post
buhat zabardast Ashraf bhai.. dil khush ker diya aap nay...

ye shair


Kiaa wahaaN ab bhi muhabbat ke kaNwal khiltay haiN?
Guzra kartii bhi jahaaN shaam suhaani apni.

iss meiN ye bhi hi hay ya thi
Aap ne bhi to dil khush kar dia he daad de kar. Bohat bohat shukria bhai Aik Lamha! Sadaa hanstay muskuratay rehiyay.
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Old 08-12-2006, 08:18 PM
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wah!!!!
zabardast Ashraf bhahi,bahot hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne hanesha ki tarah,dheron daad is khoobsurat ghazal ki naza,

4th sher ke misra-e-saani main ...THI....ki bajaaye aap ..bhi...likh gaye hain,us ko aek nazar dekh lijiye,
bahot khush rahiye.
Hamesha ki tarha Ghazal aap ko pasand aai. Bohat bohat shukria zain urf Ishtiaq Naz bhai! .Bohat khush rahiye.
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AoA!!!
hmm...
aik khubsurat ghazal perhney ko mili...
zabardast....
har share mukamal kahani rakhta hai...
konsey share ki tareef keroon k sab share hi khubsurat hain lekin yeh share tu bohut khubsurat lagey mujhey...

khaak honey ka hunar yunhi nahi aya hai
hum ney ik umar talak khaak hai chani apni

aag pani ko milatey huey bahaam hum ko
khaak main aa hi gaye khaak milani apni

aisey hi likhtey rahen aur share kertey rahen...
tcz b happi alwayz INSHA ALLAH...
AH...
Musafir bhai! aap ko ghazal pasand aai. Is ke liay maiN aap ka bayHad mamnoon hooN. b happi alwayz
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