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This is a discussion on kia aseeri within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Dosto aik ghazal aap ki khidmet maiN pesk kerta huN wassalam sohail malik کیا اسیری کیا اسیروں کا سخن کون ...


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Old 08-21-2007, 09:08 PM
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Dosto aik ghazal aap ki khidmet maiN pesk kerta huN

wassalam

sohail malik

کیا اسیری کیا اسیروں کا سخن
کون بدلے رات کا اب پیرہن

ایک بےتابی مرا اعزاز ہے
آپ کہتے ہیں بدل ڈالوں چلن

گو نظر آنے لگا ساحل ہمیں
شل ہوا طوفان سے لیکن بدن

ہم کہاں حقدار تیری دید کے
تو اگر بخشے ترا سارا چمن

دید کی خواہش اگر گستاخ ہے
کس طرح پھر روبرو ہو گا ملن

ہم ادائے سادگی میں مست تھے
غیر محفل لے گیا دکھلا کے فن

نام اس موصوف کا احساس ہے
آپ کو تکلیف دے جس کی چبھن

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Old 08-21-2007, 09:45 PM
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very nice...bohot zabardast
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Old 08-21-2007, 10:48 PM
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hmm...very nice ghazal.....
acha laga perr ker
khush rahaiN
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salaam

bauhat hi achi ghazal likhi hai aap nai umeed karti hoon likhtai rahain gai

khush rahiyai
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Old 08-21-2007, 11:49 PM
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assalam o alikum Sohail Bhaee!
Bayhadd khoobsoorat ghazal. Lutf aa gaya perh ker.
Khush rehiya
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Bohat khoob janab
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Dosto aik ghazal aap ki khidmet maiN pesk kerta huN

wassalam

sohail malik

کیا اسیری کیا اسیروں کا سخن
کون بدلے رات کا اب پیرہن

ایک بےتابی مرا اعزاز ہے
آپ کہتے ہیں بدل ڈالوں چلن

گو نظر آنے لگا ساحل ہمیں
شل ہوا طوفان سے لیکن بدن

ہم کہاں حقدار تیری دید کے
تو اگر بخشے ترا سارا چمن

دید کی خواہش اگر گستاخ ہے
کس طرح پھر روبرو ہو گا ملن

ہم ادائے سادگی میں مست تھے
غیر محفل لے گیا دکھلا کے فن

نام اس موصوف کا احساس ہے
آپ کو تکلیف دے جس کی چبھن
mashaalah
bahout khubsoorat ghazal
allah kare zor e kalam aur ziyada
aap ka
qamar
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Old 08-23-2007, 09:57 AM
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very nice...bohot zabardast
pasandeedgi ka bohat shukria

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