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RulesThis is a discussion on khuwahish within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; dil kehta hai yaroon se thako mat ke manzil abhi aage hai mushkil hai pana manzil mana hum ne per ...
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#1
09-17-2007, 12:13 AM
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dil kehta hai yaroon se thako mat ke manzil abhi aage hai mushkil hai pana manzil mana hum ne per koshish se hi milti hai manzil yaroon dhek ke himmat mre dost mre utthai barne ke khuwahish dil main her kathin lamhooon main woh rahe purjooosh aur pale manzil hum ne na mumkin hota mumkin mre dost jab thaan le manzil ko pane ke khuwahish dil main                  |
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#2
09-17-2007, 06:03 AM
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achi hai lakin rawani ya phir alfaz ka istamal saheeh naheen laga mughay to............:angel 1 |
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09-17-2007, 11:31 PM
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hi... ap ke khayalaat achay hain... mashq jari rakhiye nikhaar aajayega khush rahaiN
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09-19-2007, 07:46 AM
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achi kawish hy, thooughts to bohat khoob haiN, mager andaaz-e-bayaN behteri chahta hy, misry aisy hony chahiaiN k rawani se paRhy ja'aiN, kahiN atakna na paRy... aur ap ne jis trha roman meiN likha, mujhy kuch lafz samajhny meiN diq'qat pesh aa'ei... ap ager koshish kreN to is se bohat behter likh sakty haiN, bas mashq jari rakheN, aur mash'hor shoa'ra ka kalaam paRhty raha kreN, is se ap ko misra banany meiN aur sher kehny meiN madad mily gi... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN aabad raheN....
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#5
09-19-2007, 09:53 PM
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Shukria Aap Ke Reply Ka Inshallah Main Behtri Laane Ke Koshish Kroon Ga |
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09-19-2007, 10:44 PM
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 achi koshish hai Awais... Faizan ki batoN par tawajja dijiye.. khush rahiye
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09-19-2007, 11:25 PM
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aap ka pehla misra mushkil hai pana manzil... yehi misra aap apne pale bandh leen abi saari zindagi pari hai doosroon ki takhliqaat ghoor se parha kareen ke fikra kaise banta hai jab woh banana aa gaya to rawaani aur rabt paida ho jayeega... keep going . agar aap ki ghazal mein kehta to aise fikra banata deekheen. manzil kathan sahi magar hain hosle jawaan chalte raho ke rah e wafa mein hai karwaan himmat na harna kissi mushkil ke khouf se barhte raho ke waqt ne hona hai meharbaan yeh sirf misaal hai aise hi koshish karo ke naye andaaz se apne fikre banao aur yehi andaaz jab tumhare apne zehan se nikle ga to tumhari shanakht .. tumhara asloob kehlayee ga. yeh dono misre mein ne tumhare naam kiye chaho to apne naam ke saath laga lo. duaon ke saath qamar
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