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**yasmin ahmad** · #11 09-07-2007, 08:02 PM

welcome Mehtab and Qamar.

**13 Mera 7 Rhey** · #12 09-07-2007, 10:27 PM

Wel com bhai .................... .................... .........

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piyaari_larki · #13 09-08-2007, 04:11 PM

very warm welcom qamar bhai n Mehtab........

**qamar94** · #14 09-08-2007, 05:22 PM

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Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts

ap meiN se kuch dost janty hoN gy k hamary aik Moderator "Mehtab" bhai, apni masrofiaat ki waja se MOD-ship se leave pr thy...

Mehtab bhai ab wapis aa' ga'ay haiN aur aik bar phir Poets Club k moderator k fra'iz sar'anjaam deN gy....

so aa'iay mil kr un ka istaqbaal krty haiN:

urdu poets club meiN wapsi pr khush-aamadeed Mehtab!!!

iske sath sath... hum yeh bhi batatay chalaiN...k Qamar bhai ab say humaiN bataur-e-judge join kar rahay haiN... to aaiye... humaray sath mil kar Qamar bhai ko bhi khush amadeed kahiye..

khush amdeed Qamar bhai...

**zain** · #15 09-08-2007, 06:28 PM

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
khush aamded Qamar bhahi,
yeh yaqeenan hamaari khush qismati hai ke aap jesey saahib-e-fun,saahib--ilm,aor saahib-e-kamaal shakhsiyat se hamain bhi faiz yaab honey ka moqa mil raha hai,( Dua hai ke yeh silsila chalta rahey, Aameen),
aap ne bahot khoobsurat baatain ki,aor mujhey un se poora itefaaq bhi hai,URDU ZUBAAN yaqeenan hamaari pehchaan hai,aor URDU SHAAIRY ko main URDU ZUBAAN ki rooh samajhta hoon,so ham sab ko is ke farogh,aor taraqqi ke liye koshaaN rehna chaahiye,.......is hawaaley se dekha jaaye to......Basit bhahi ki azmat ko yaqeenan salaam karney ko dil chaahata hai,jinhon ne yeh sab na sirf mehsoos kiya,balke issey amli shakal main apnaya bhi,aor hamain aek aesa ghar,aek aesi mehfil faraaham ki,jahaan ham na sirf khud kuch seekh saktey hain,balke ALLAH ki zaat ne jo hamain diya hai,woh doosaron tak pohnchaaney ki koshish bhi kar saktey hain,aor is maqsad ke hasool ke liye un ki koshashain yaqeenan qaabil-e-sataaish hain,

aap ne jo mashwara diya,mujhey zaati tor par is se bilkul itefaaq hai,..balke yeh baat merey zehan main bhi thi ke aesa kuchh hona chaahiye,lekin kuchh susti,aor kuchh majbooriyon ki bina par is par amal karna mumkin na huwa,..........ab jabke aap ka saath bhi muyassar hai to mera khayaal hai ke is ko amli tor par apnana chaahiye,yaqeenan is se hamain bahot kuchh seekhaney ka moqa miley ga,..........bas dekhna yeh hai ke baaqi saathi is baarey main kaya raaye rakhtey hain,aor issey kab aor kesey amli shakl di ja sakti hai,

bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

**qamar94** · #16 09-09-2007, 02:17 PM

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Originally Posted by zain

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
khush aamded Qamar bhahi,
yeh yaqeenan hamaari khush qismati hai ke aap jesey saahib-e-fun,saahib--ilm,aor saahib-e-kamaal shakhsiyat se hamain bhi faiz yaab honey ka moqa mil raha hai,( Dua hai ke yeh silsila chalta rahey, Aameen),
aap ne bahot khoobsurat baatain ki,aor mujhey un se poora itefaaq bhi hai,URDU ZUBAAN yaqeenan hamaari pehchaan hai,aor URDU SHAAIRY ko main URDU ZUBAAN ki rooh samajhta hoon,so ham sab ko is ke farogh,aor taraqqi ke liye koshaaN rehna chaahiye,.......is hawaaley se dekha jaaye to......Basit bhahi ki azmat ko yaqeenan salaam karney ko dil chaahata hai,jinhon ne yeh sab na sirf mehsoos kiya,balke issey amli shakal main apnaya bhi,aor hamain aek aesa ghar,aek aesi mehfil faraaham ki,jahaan ham na sirf khud kuch seekh saktey hain,balke ALLAH ki zaat ne jo hamain diya hai,woh doosaron tak pohnchaaney ki koshish bhi kar saktey hain,aor is maqsad ke hasool ke liye un ki koshashain yaqeenan qaabil-e-sataaish hain,

aap ne jo mashwara diya,mujhey zaati tor par is se bilkul itefaaq hai,..balke yeh baat merey zehan main bhi thi ke aesa kuchh hona chaahiye,lekin kuchh susti,aor kuchh majbooriyon ki bina par is par amal karna mumkin na huwa,..........ab jabke aap ka saath bhi muyassar hai to mera khayaal hai ke is ko amli tor par apnana chaahiye,yaqeenan is se hamain bahot kuchh seekhaney ka moqa miley ga,..........bas dekhna yeh hai ke baaqi saathi is baarey main kaya raaye rakhtey hain,aor issey kab aor kesey amli shakl di ja sakti hai,

bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

adaab.
mein ne forum mein kuch dostoon ko un ki diction ki khamiyoon se agah karne ki koshish ki lekon jaisa ke insaani fitrat hai isse qabool karna mushkil hota hai....... is liye mein ne apni eik ghazal mein eik diction ka saqam paida kar ke usse tanqid ke liye pesh kiya maqsad yeh tha ke ghair mehsoos tarike se naye likhne waloon ko bataya ja sake ke aisa likhna ghalat ho ga is tara un ki tathir hoti rahe gi lekon kissi ne tawajo nahin di is silsile mein aap ke tahawan ki zaroorat hai ke dostoon ko is janib matwajo kiya jayee aur eik takhliq pe saara hafta ilmi o adbi behas ki jayee aur aakhir mein us ki khaamiyoun ko disclose kiya jayee....

aap meri tanqidi ghazal parheen deekhnee mein koi khaami nahin lekon us ke ander eik bahout bata sabaq poshida hai mein ne us mein jo kaafia bandha hai zara us pe ghoor kareen.
aap ka qamar

**silent_wishes** · #17 09-10-2007, 10:39 PM

WARM WELCOME TO MEHTAB BHAI
n
QAMAR BHAI

**kanch ki mehroo** · #18 09-10-2007, 10:53 PM

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Originally Posted by qamar94

adaab.
mein ne forum mein kuch dostoon ko un ki diction ki khamiyoon se agah karne ki koshish ki lekon jaisa ke insaani fitrat hai isse qabool karna mushkil hota hai....... is liye mein ne apni eik ghazal mein eik diction ka saqam paida kar ke usse tanqid ke liye pesh kiya maqsad yeh tha ke ghair mehsoos tarike se naye likhne waloon ko bataya ja sake ke aisa likhna ghalat ho ga is tara un ki tathir hoti rahe gi lekon kissi ne tawajo nahin di is silsile mein aap ke tahawan ki zaroorat hai ke dostoon ko is janib matwajo kiya jayee aur eik takhliq pe saara hafta ilmi o adbi behas ki jayee aur aakhir mein us ki khaamiyoun ko disclose kiya jayee....

aap meri tanqidi ghazal parheen deekhnee mein koi khaami nahin lekon us ke ander eik bahout bata sabaq poshida hai mein ne us mein jo kaafia bandha hai zara us pe ghoor kareen.
aap ka qamar

aapne bohat hi acha mashwara diya Qamar bhai... yaqeenan yeh bohat faida mand hoga sab k liye... lekin filhal choNke hum log Poets Club k kuch deegar muamlat maiN uljhay haiN...to is silsilay ko bharpoor tawajja daina bohat mushkil ho jayega... yeh wohi majbooriyaN haiN jinka zikr zaini ne bhi kia...

ab kia karaiN

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Khush amdeed Mehtab aur janab Irshad Qamar..

Khush amdeed Mehtab aur janab Irshad Qamar..