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This is a discussion on khud se bezaar,zamaane se khafa lagta hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ghum jo iss baar mila, naz juda lagta hai wahhhhhh.. kya hi kehnay.. ishtiaq sahib.. bohat umdah ghazal kahi .. ...
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| ghum jo iss baar mila, naz juda lagta hai wahhhhhh.. kya hi kehnay.. ishtiaq sahib.. bohat umdah ghazal kahi .. MashaAllah.. dhairon daad hazir-e-khidmat hai.. qabool kijiye.. Bohat Shukria.. @};- wafa aur dua ke saath withlove @};-
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#12
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| Meri post thi yahan 2nd # par may b...wo dlt kisne ki? aur kion?
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#13
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| ji karb,aap bilkul theek keh rahi hain,aap ki 2nd post thi,lekin doosari thread par, ![]() main choonke us ghazal se mutma.in naheen tha,is liye mere kehne par woh thread DLETE kar di gayi hai,aor is thread main yeh ghazal nazar saani ke ba.ad,kuchh aor sheron ke izaafe ka saath dobara post ki gayi hai, ![]() bahot ma.azarat chahoon ga,agar yeh amal kissi bhi lehaaz se aap ke liye dil aazaari,ya pareshaani ka baais bana ho to, aap ke comments ka intazaar rahe ga. bahot khush rahiye, ![]()
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#14
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| hmm...........nice ghazal dear
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#15
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![]() Oh ager ye baat hai to i apologize ke mene bother kia aapko actually uspe aik misre par baat howi thi....to mene socha ke kahin kisi ko laga ke mene kuch ghalat likh di ahai is liye dlt howi.....mujhe andaza nahi tha ke puri new thread hai...... ![]() |
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#16
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| Zaini Bhai Hamesha ki tarah aik Umdah ghazal kahi hay Ab na ankhoon main nami aii na dil hi tarpa Gham jo iss baar Mila Naz juda lagta hay Zain bhai sab shair hi class k the magar is shair ne balay balay kardi Sedha thah kar k laga aur waqiay Juda sa laga Buhat khush rahiay aur isi tarah se hamen apne kalam sunate rahiay
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#17
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| Ji Zain! ab lutf aaya na matly ka.... bohat acha ho gya hy.... wsey to abhi bhi aik lafz ko improve kya ja sakta hy.... (koi ki jaga Shakhs laga dain to matla mzeid nikhar ja'y ga, but ye mera khyaal hy, zururi nahi aap ya koi aur is se mutafiq hoN) baki ghazal to achi hy magar 2nd last sher main Masheeat'e Aaizdi aap ne correct use kia hy ya nahi, ye bat mujhy confuse kr rahi hy..... plz bta dain.....
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#18
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| boht khoob ishtiaq sahab ![]() kis khoobi say dill ki chubhan ko kaghaz per utara hay keh har shakhs ko apni hi kahani lagti hay jaansooz mehroomi nainsafi ka dukh kawash e raigaan ka mallal kia kuch nahin is main :0 kush raheay ![]()
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