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Kheyal Mur k deykhta hey.. aap doston ki nazr, aik nazm

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very nice

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loved the title magar nazam main salasat aur rawani ki kami mehsoos hui.

Ussss kay lehjay mein Chupa Azam.. !!
Manzilain Khareed Sakta hai.. !!

Bhai sahib aap apna taruf karwa dain.. humain aap baray chupay rustam lagtay hain.. bohat umdaah nazam hai.. aur pehlay bhi jo parheen woh bhi kam na theen.. /weldone aik aur baat aap itna acha likhtay hain aur inpage mein post kartay hain.. agar chahaain tu jaisa mein ya fahad ya kuch aur saathi kartay hain post i mean graphically presentation tu mujh ko PM kijiyeah ga.. I think it can done and than obviously such a beautiful poetry can be presented in its right presentable form @};-

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bohot hi khubsorat nazam hai janab youn hi likhtey rahiye aur share karta rahiye

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Bohat shukreya aap logon ka. Cool aagar aap nazm k wo hissey mention ker deyin jahan aap samgtey hein k gungahish hey improvement ki, to mein behter tor per nasr-e-sani ker sakon ga. Aor Basit bhae, aapna taaruf to bohat sada sa hey 'Chadar-e-khak mein ik khak basar hon bas'. Naam Inam hey, Perta Physics hon, Shoq shairi ka hey, Aumr us sey kam hey jitni guzar chuka hon.
Aor bohat shukreya aap ki peshkash ka, zaroor aap ko jo nazm aache lagey to waqt nikal ker aapney andaz mein present kejeye. bari nawazish.
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