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| Salaam Basit bhai! achhay khayaal k saath bohat achhi koshish hai but if u don't mind so i wanna say that it's out of 'Wazan'. shayad aap se lihnay main ghalati hui hai ,ager nahi to phir meray khyaal main aap ko isay aik martaba phir tawajja se daikhna chahye. mujhay ummid hai aap bura nahi maanaingay /unsure Soft voice /piano
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#18
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| salaam basit kaisay hoo app??? well i must say tha gazal is really vv nice v well written ....mujhay tu iss ka her sher hi bahut pasand aaya naa ...bahut achay likhtay rahoo aur khush rahoooo(but i know k likhna aur khush rehna doono kafi mushkil hein khoon-e-jiger dena perta hey naa tab kahin ja ker alfaaz terteeb patay hein ) Allah hafizzz |
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