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~**... Khawb Jo Chashm e Tar Mein Rahay ... **~

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Old 12-03-2003, 06:20 AM
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Tujh say bicharay toh sada
Tashnagi ki lehr mein rahay... /luv

buhut he khoob !
buhut he zabardast !!
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Old 12-03-2003, 09:32 AM
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kal shab dam tour gaey Basit
Khwaab joo chashm-e-tar mein rahey



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Old 12-03-2003, 09:36 AM
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AOA Basit, wah bohat khoob janab

chand kab kisi ko milta hay
nahuq hum safar main rahey


bohat khoob, likhtey raheye khush raheye /happy
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Old 12-03-2003, 10:05 AM
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hmmmm aik achii ghazal!!! well done Basit Sahab
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/aoa

thats lovely... bohut umda...ap kab apna sara kalam aik hi jaga puhncha rahey hein???


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Salaam Basit bhai!

achhay khayaal k saath bohat achhi koshish hai
but if u don't mind so i wanna say that it's out of 'Wazan'.
shayad aap se lihnay main ghalati hui hai ,ager nahi to phir
meray khyaal main aap ko isay aik martaba phir tawajja se
daikhna chahye.
mujhay ummid hai aap bura nahi maanaingay /unsure

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Chand kab kissi ko milta hay
Nahaq hum safar mein rahey


Hmm Beautiful , Lubly ... Khoob hay bohat khoob @};-





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salaam basit
kaisay hoo app???
well i must say tha gazal is really vv nice v well written ....mujhay tu iss ka her sher hi bahut pasand aaya naa ...bahut achay
likhtay rahoo aur khush rahoooo(but i know k likhna aur khush rehna doono kafi mushkil hein khoon-e-jiger dena perta hey naa tab kahin ja ker alfaaz terteeb patay hein )
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Chaand kab kissi ko miltaa hai
Naa Haq hum safar main rahay ..


buhat khoob .. /good
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Salam,

Umda ashar hain janab /happy .Buhaat pasand ay.Likhtay rahein.
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