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This is a discussion on --khamoshi sukhti hai,jaan say dhuwan uthta hai--- within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Khomoshi sokhti hai,jaan say dhuan uthta hai haye kuch kar,teri rehmat ka gumaan uthta hai Tum to uth jatay ho ...
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| Khomoshi sokhti hai,jaan say dhuan uthta hai haye kuch kar,teri rehmat ka gumaan uthta hai Tum to uth jatay ho keh kar kay aab chalata hon yaan kisi shakhs ka duneya say samaan uthta hai Kuch nahi hota teray janay say'hona kea hai haan mera sari Khuddai say emaan uthta hai Maartay bhe nahi hamko, kay duneya say yun apkay hussn-e-zeshani ka nishaan uthta hai Wo jo uthta tha teray honay say pehloo mein nashaa wo teri yaad mein khonay say kahan uthta hai haye,aaja 'tera mazi ka khuda uthta hai haye aaja kay mera kar-e-jahan uthta hai By umar barque<!-- google_ad_section_en d --> |
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#2
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| Hi. ghazal ka 2 shair passand ayaduaoun ke saath Yasmin Yasi |
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#3
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aik aur umda kawish pesh ki hy aap ne.... kuch sheroN ne to bohat hi lutf diya, aap ki si ghazal ne classical ghazloN ki yad taza kr di... maslan "dekh to dil, k haN se uThta hy - - - ye dhuaN sa kahaN se uThta hy." kuch muqamat pr wazn k hawaly se kami ka ehsaas hua... misal k tor pr 2nd sher ka pehla misra aur 4th sher ka pehla misra wazn k lehaz se tawaju talab hy.... majmoi tor pr aik umda kawish pesh krny pr dheroN daad hazir hy, qubool kijiay... isi trha acha acha likhty raheN, aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary,,, khush raheN, aabad raheN....
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#4
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| wah bohat achhi ghazal likhi hai bohat achha laga parh kar ... bohat bohat daad qabool karyeee
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#5
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| v nice kavish thoughts ore alfaz ka chunayo acha laga all the best
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#6
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| bohat khub
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#7
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| wah,bahot khoob janaab,bahot achhi nazam |