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Old 06-14-2007, 08:59 PM
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Khomoshi sokhti hai,jaan say dhuan uthta hai
haye kuch kar,teri rehmat ka gumaan uthta hai


Tum to uth jatay ho keh kar kay aab chalata hon
yaan kisi shakhs ka duneya say samaan uthta hai

Kuch nahi hota teray janay say'hona kea hai
haan mera sari Khuddai say emaan uthta hai

Maartay bhe nahi hamko, kay duneya say yun
apkay hussn-e-zeshani ka nishaan uthta hai

Wo jo uthta tha teray honay say pehloo mein nashaa
wo teri yaad mein khonay say kahan uthta hai

haye,aaja 'tera mazi ka khuda uthta hai
haye aaja kay mera kar-e-jahan uthta hai


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Old 06-15-2007, 05:18 AM
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Hi. ghazal ka 2 shair passand ayaduaoun ke saath
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Khomoshi sokhti hai,jaan say dhuan uthta hai
haye kuch kar,teri rehmat ka gumaan uthta hai

Tum to uth jatay ho keh kar kay aab chalata hon
yaan kisi shakhs ka duneya say samaan uthta hai

Kuch nahi hota teray janay say'hona kea hai
haan mera sari Khuddai say emaan uthta hai

Maartay bhe nahi hamko, kay duneya say yun
apkay hussn-e-zeshani ka nishaan uthta hai

Wo jo uthta tha teray honay say pehloo mein nashaa
wo teri yaad mein khonay say kahan uthta hai

haye,aaja 'tera mazi ka khuda uthta hai
haye aaja kay mera kar-e-jahan uthta hai


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As-salam-o-alaikum Umar sahab!!!
aik aur umda kawish pesh ki hy aap ne.... kuch sheroN ne to bohat hi lutf diya, aap ki si ghazal ne classical ghazloN ki yad taza kr di... maslan "dekh to dil, k haN se uThta hy - - - ye dhuaN sa kahaN se uThta hy."

kuch muqamat pr wazn k hawaly se kami ka ehsaas hua... misal k tor pr 2nd sher ka pehla misra aur 4th sher ka pehla misra wazn k lehaz se tawaju talab hy....

majmoi tor pr aik umda kawish pesh krny pr dheroN daad hazir hy, qubool kijiay...
isi trha acha acha likhty raheN, aur ham se share krty raheN,
Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary,,,
khush raheN, aabad raheN....
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wah bohat achhi ghazal likhi hai
bohat achha laga parh kar ...
bohat bohat daad qabool karyeee
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v nice kavish thoughts ore alfaz ka chunayo acha laga
all the best
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wah,bahot khoob janaab,bahot achhi nazam
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