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This is a discussion on kehta hy kya ye manzer... (Muqabla-e-nazm goi, Jun-08) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto! kuch maah qabl poets club meiN " kehta hy kya ye manzer... " k nam se aik qadray ...
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| As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto! kuch maah qabl poets club meiN "kehta hy kya ye manzer..." k nam se aik qadray mukhtalif silsily ka aaghaz kiya gya tha, isi silsily ko aagy baRhaty hu'ay is maah bhi aik tasweer ka intkhab kiya gya hy... na'ay aany waly members k liay kuch tafseel batata chaluN: ye to akser hi dekhny meiN aaya hy k kaei shaa'iroN k kalaam ko paintings ki shakl meiN express kiya jata hy... misaal k tor pr mash'hoor musav'ir Sadiqain sahab ny Dr. Allama Iqbal k kaei sheroN ko tasweeri shakl meiN pesh kiya... lekin Poets Club k is silsily meiN ham is se kuch mukhtalif kaam kreN gy, yaani aik pehly se bana'ay ga'ay manzer ko alfaaz meiN qaid kreN gy... ye alfaaz sheiroN ki shakl (paband nazm) meiN bhi ho sakty haiN aur aazad nazm ki shakl meiN bhi... is silsily ka maqsad na'ay likhny waloN meiN takhleeqi quwat ko ubharna, aur purany likhny waloN k liay zehni tar-o-tazgi ka saman krna hy... muqably meiN shirkat ki aakhri tareekh itwar-21-June-2008 hy, manzer kuch youN hy: ![]() is silsily k rules ye hoNgy k: 1- aik member sirf aik hi takhleeq share kr sakta hy 2- pehly se likha hua kalaam share nahiN kiya ja'ay ga... 3- is tasweer k mutabiq apni kawish ko aik unwaan zuroor dena ho ga, werna unwan k number kaaT liay ja'aiN gy. 4- marks sirf aur sirf nazm aur image k mabain rabt ko mad-e-nazer rakhty hu'ay di'ay ja'aiN gy, na k sirf nazm ko is image k design ki shakl meiN pesh krny pr. to dosto is manzer ko dekhi'ay aur apny takhayul se jo bhi soch / khyaal zehn meiN aa'ay usy nazm ki surat mei tehreer kr deN... wish u all best of luck ![]()
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 06-06-2008 at 01:12 PM. |
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| kahaN ho ga'ay sab log.... |
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#3
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| Lajawab Aur Qabile Deed Manzar Hay Try Karein Gein Ji |
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| wish u best of luck ![]() |
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| Tanhai ... Sham dhaltay hi chiragoo ko bhujaya hay main nain phir teri yadoon ka diyya bhi jalaya hay main nain kabhi kitaab ki satroon main uljhaya hay main nain tu kabhi khud ko manzer sy anjan bnaya hay main nain Her moor pay her kahani main tum mill jaatay hoo Tum nahi ho kahiin phir dair talak khud ko samjhaya hay main nain |
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| aoa. atif bhia ye thread close kab honi hy bta dijay ta k hum barwakt koshish kar lain . |
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| Quote:
aur mera naam "Aatif" aap ko kis ne bataaya hy??? Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 06-06-2008 at 01:16 PM. |
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| Kia kehny janab Bahot hi khoob manzar dekhny k qabil hai is tasweer k manzar mein ek tanhai si hai. |