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This is a discussion on Kayee dil maiN aisay maqaam haiN within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Ye jo talkh talkh se jaam haiN, mere shehr maiN, baRay aam haiN InheN kioN na baRh ke uThaaooN maiN, ...
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#1
12-05-2007, 02:56 PM
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Ye jo talkh talkh se jaam haiN, mere shehr maiN, baRay aam haiN InheN kioN na baRh ke uThaaooN maiN, ke ye saaray gham tere naam haiN Mujhe dekh kar bhi na dekhna, tujhe maiN ne sehl bana dia Tujhe dekhte hi palaT gaya, yahi keh dia, "mujhe kaam haiN" Tujhe jhelna zara sehl hai, mujhe jhelna zara sakht hai Tere chaarsoo, kayee log haiN, mere chaarsoo, dar-o-baam haiN KarooN khoj kia, kisi baat ki, na khabar hai apni hi zaat ki Kabhi khud na apna guzar hua, kayee dil maiN aisay maqaam haiN Ye ham ehl-e-dil ka hi sabr hai, jo saha kuch aisa bhi jabr hai Wo jo khwaab jaaN se azeez thay, unheN baichtay, sar-e-aam haiN
__________________ ******************** ******************* MaiN bulata to hooN usko magar aye jazba-e-dil Us pe ban jaye kuch aisi ke bin aaye na banay (Ghalib) Last edited by Saraabs; 12-05-2007 at 06:28 PM.         |
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#2
12-06-2007, 10:37 AM
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KarooN khoj kia, kisi baat ki, na khabar hai apni hi zaat ki Kabhi khud na apna guzar hua, kayee dil maiN aisay maqaam haiN bohut khoob saraab bhai, bohut achi ghazal likhi ha apnay khaas tor sey ye shair mujy bohut passand aya. humaishah khush rahoo
__________________  kaash aisa kamal hojayewo mera hum khayal hojaye |
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#3
12-06-2007, 06:09 PM
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KarooN khoj kia, kisi baat ki, na khabar hai apni hi zaat ki Kabhi khud na apna guzar hua, kayee dil maiN aisay maqaam haiN Ye ham ehl-e-dil ka hi sabr hai, jo saha kuch aisa bhi jabr hai Wo jo khwaab jaaN se azeez thay, unheN baichtay, sar-e-aam haiN wawwwwwww........... itnay khoobsorat khyalaat kafi din bad aai hon aur itna acha laga parh kar...bohat khush rahin isi trah shandaar likhtay rahin aur hm parhtay rahin......... 
__________________  MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...!  |
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#4
12-06-2007, 06:14 PM
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wahh Saraab bhai bohot aala sher kahay ap ne dher sari daad meri taraf se qabool kijiye khush rahiye
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12-07-2007, 07:19 AM
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12-07-2007, 07:20 AM
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12-07-2007, 07:23 AM
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12-07-2007, 10:33 AM
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 aap se acha nahin likhti hoN aap waqee bohat achi ghazal likhtay hain...kash main bhi likh paoN Bohat khush rahin aap aur isi trah shandaar likhtay rahin
__________________ MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...! |
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#9
12-07-2007, 10:44 PM
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Wahh Waahh bOhet Hii Shandaar Ghazal Kahi Aap Nay mOhtram Samajh Nahi Aa Raha Kis Shair Pey Aap ko Daad dOon Kamal Kii Ghazal Kahii Aap Nay DhairOn Dhair Daad QabOol Kijiye Meri Traf Say Bhii Allah Molla Or Day (Aameen)
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#10
12-08-2007, 10:25 AM
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bohut khubsurat ghazal kahi he saraab sahib, mubarakbaad qabool kijye |
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