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Kayee dil maiN aisay maqaam haiN

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Bohat .....shukria .....lakin aap se acha nahin likhti hoN
aap waqee bohat achi ghazal likhtay hain...kash main bhi likh paoN
Bohat khush rahin aap aur isi trah shandaar likhtay rahin
Kanwal Sahiba, ye mehez aap ki zarra nawazi aur kasr-e-nafsi hai warna aisi koi baat nahin aur iska wazeh suboot aap ki taza ghazal hai jis ne ham sab ko lajawaab kar ke rakh dia hai
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Waahh
bOhet Hii Shandaar Ghazal Kahi Aap Nay mOhtram
Samajh Nahi Aa Raha Kis Shair Pey Aap ko Daad dOon
Kamal Kii Ghazal Kahii Aap Nay
DhairOn Dhair Daad QabOol Kijiye Meri Traf Say Bhii
Allah Molla Or Day (Aameen)
Bohot bohot shurkia janab....aap ne to sharminda kar dia
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bohut khubsurat ghazal kahi he saraab sahib, mubarakbaad qabool kijye
Aap jaise buland-khayal shaire ki janib se hosla afzai dobara likhne ki tehreek paida karti hai, nawazish hai aap ki
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Ye jo talkh talkh se jaam haiN, mere shehr maiN, baRay aam haiN
InheN kioN na baRh ke uThaaooN maiN, ke ye saaray gham tere naam haiN

Mujhe dekh kar bhi na dekhna, tujhe maiN ne sehl bana dia
Tujhe dekhte hi palaT gaya, yahi keh dia, "mujhe kaam haiN"

Tujhe jhelna zara sehl hai, mujhe jhelna zara sakht hai
Tere chaarsoo, kayee log haiN, mere chaarsoo, dar-o-baam haiN

KarooN khoj kia, kisi baat ki, na khabar hai apni hi zaat ki
Kabhi khud na apna guzar hua, kayee dil maiN aisay maqaam haiN

Ye ham ehl-e-dil ka hi sabr hai, jo saha kuch aisa bhi jabr hai
Wo jo khwaab jaaN se azeez thay, unheN baichtay, sar-e-aam haiN

baei wahhhhhh..... subhaanAllah subhanAllah....... bohat khoobbbb.... yar kya kahuN itny dilkash ashaar k bary....... wahhhh...... jnab kash aap is waqt samny hoty to aap ko galy laga leta.... kya likhty haiN aap.... bohat umda....

itni taweel behr ko itna asar-angaiz krna yaqeenan kaar-e-mushkil hy.... mager in ash'aar ko paRh kr lagta hy aap k liay to aam si baat hy aisy shair kehna... Allah Mola aap ko aur ata kary... her her sheir pr dheroN daad qubool kreN... khush raheN aabad raheN....
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Lajwab Sarrab Bhai, lajawab..... Mujhe alfaz nahin mil rahe jo aap ki is ghazal ki tareef ke qabil hoon. . .bohat hi umda....kya kehne
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baei wahhhhhh..... subhaanAllah subhanAllah....... bohat khoobbbb.... yar kya kahuN itny dilkash ashaar k bary....... wahhhh...... jnab kash aap is waqt samny hoty to aap ko galy laga leta.... kya likhty haiN aap.... bohat umda....

itni taweel behr ko itna asar-angaiz krna yaqeenan kaar-e-mushkil hy.... mager in ash'aar ko paRh kr lagta hy aap k liay to aam si baat hy aisy shair kehna... Allah Mola aap ko aur ata kary... her her sheir pr dheroN daad qubool kreN... khush raheN aabad raheN....
Faizan Bhai, yaar aap to ek baar phir sharminda kiye de rahe hain, bohot bohot shukria aap ke itne khuloos aur mohabbat ka, aur jahan tak galay lagane ki baat hai to ye to meri bhi dili khwahish hai magar masla ye hai ke aap aur ham alag alag shehron ke baasi thehre, inshaAllah jab kabhi mulaqat hogi to ye khwahish bhi zaroor poori hojayegi
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Lajwab Sarrab Bhai, lajawab..... Mujhe alfaz nahin mil rahe jo aap ki is ghazal ki tareef ke qabil hoon. . .bohat hi umda....kya kehne
Aray janab, itna kuch to aap ne keh dia ab aur lafz kion dhoondte hain, bohot bohot shukria aap ki is zarra nawazi ke liye, koshish karoonga ke aaenda bhi aap ko mayoos na karoon
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Ye jo talkh talkh se jaam haiN, mere shehr maiN, baRay aam haiN
InheN kioN na baRh ke uThaaooN maiN, ke ye saaray gham tere naam haiN

Mujhe dekh kar bhi na dekhna, tujhe maiN ne sehl bana dia
Tujhe dekhte hi palaT gaya, yahi keh dia, "mujhe kaam haiN"

Tujhe jhelna zara sehl hai, mujhe jhelna zara sakht hai
Tere chaarsoo, kayee log haiN, mere chaarsoo, dar-o-baam haiN

KarooN khoj kia, kisi baat ki, na khabar hai apni hi zaat ki
Kabhi khud na apna guzar hua, kayee dil maiN aisay maqaam haiN

Ye ham ehl-e-dil ka hi sabr hai, jo saha kuch aisa bhi jabr hai
Wo jo khwaab jaaN se azeez thay, unheN baichtay, sar-e-aam haiN



Bohat Khubsurat Ghazal Hai ...........Aap Bohat Acha Likhtay Hain
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