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Old 05-10-2006, 11:08 AM
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karo intizaar tum bhi to ahssas hoga
karra waqt hai judai ka tanhai ka

karo kabhi khial hamara to ahssaas hoga
talkh hoti hain yadain jo rah jati hain baaqi

karoo tum bhi batain dewaroon sai to ahsaas hoga
kitna mushkil hai khuud sai batain karna

kabhi jalao andhairay mai shama to ahssaas hoga
ik tha tumhara parwanna jis ko tum nai chor diya

kabhi tum ko neend na ayyay to ahsaas hoga
kitna mushkil hai khamoosh chatt ko takna

aah khuda na karay tum ko kabhi ahssas ho
kai jis tarhan mai mahsoos karta hoon mai nai mahssoos kia.............

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Default Re: karo intizaar tum bhi to ahssas hoga

bahi ji jo bhi hai acha hai

khayalaat achey hain un pe daad qobool kejeye

per

agar aap bura na manain tu hum aik baat arz karain

k ghazal main radeef aur qafeye ka hona zorori hai ... aap nay is kalam ko ghazal k zumrey main gardana per is main in dono ajzay-e shairi ka wojood nahi hai ...

kehne ka matlub ye hai k agar aap ghazal likhne k khwahaan hain tu tu bas zara qafeye radeef ka khayal kar lain tu behtreen kalaam samney aay ga kyu k aap k haan khayal aur alfaaz odno kamal k hain

umeed hai humarey nanhey sey mashware ka bura na mana jay ga ... ba sourat-e degar hum is k leye mazrat khwah hain paishgi

bohat khush raheye aur likhtey raheye
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Old 05-10-2006, 11:20 AM
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bahi ji jo bhi hai acha hai

khayalaat achey hain un pe daad qobool kejeye

per

agar aap bura na manain tu hum aik baat arz karain

k ghazal main radeef aur qafeye ka hona zorori hai ... aap nay is kalam ko ghazal k zumrey main gardana per is main in dono ajzay-e shairi ka wojood nahi hai ...

kehne ka matlub ye hai k agar aap ghazal likhne k khwahaan hain tu tu bas zara qafeye radeef ka khayal kar lain tu behtreen kalaam samney aay ga kyu k aap k haan khayal aur alfaaz odno kamal k hain

umeed hai humarey nanhey sey mashware ka bura na mana jay ga ... ba sourat-e degar hum is k leye mazrat khwah hain paishgi

bohat khush raheye aur likhtey raheye

shagufta jii adab arz hai

pahly baat to yah hai kai mai in tamam batoon sai baebahra hoon

bus jub likhta hoon to likh daita hoon mai nai is ko ghazal is liyay kaha kai kuch to kahna hi tha or nazam mujhe ko khud hi nahin lagi is liyay lihaza han mujhaie chaiyay tha kai is ko others kah daita

app ka nanha sa mashwara bhi dewar griadainay kai liyay kafi hai

khush rahiyay app bhi or mashwaray daitay rahiyay

wassalam meer
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very beautiful.
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janab acha khayal hai .. keep writing @};-

khush rahooo
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wahh janab.. khoob likha.. Bohat si daad hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
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acha likha hai meer!!!
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buhat khub................ ........
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hmmm... acha likha ......
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