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This is a discussion on karo intizaar tum bhi to ahssas hoga within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; karo intizaar tum bhi to ahssas hoga karra waqt hai judai ka tanhai ka karo kabhi khial hamara to ahssaas ...
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| karo intizaar tum bhi to ahssas hoga karra waqt hai judai ka tanhai ka karo kabhi khial hamara to ahssaas hoga talkh hoti hain yadain jo rah jati hain baaqi karoo tum bhi batain dewaroon sai to ahsaas hoga kitna mushkil hai khuud sai batain karna kabhi jalao andhairay mai shama to ahssaas hoga ik tha tumhara parwanna jis ko tum nai chor diya kabhi tum ko neend na ayyay to ahsaas hoga kitna mushkil hai khamoosh chatt ko takna aah khuda na karay tum ko kabhi ahssas ho kai jis tarhan mai mahsoos karta hoon mai nai mahssoos kia.............
__________________ doorejadded ka meer hoon sadion ko yad rakhta hon mai taqqi oo dard ki khaaq hoon sahib hoon meer takhallus rakhta hoon meer Last edited by meerji; 05-10-2006 at 11:10 AM. |
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#2
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| bahi ji jo bhi hai acha hai ![]() khayalaat achey hain un pe daad qobool kejeye per agar aap bura na manain tu hum aik baat arz karain k ghazal main radeef aur qafeye ka hona zorori hai ... aap nay is kalam ko ghazal k zumrey main gardana per is main in dono ajzay-e shairi ka wojood nahi hai ... kehne ka matlub ye hai k agar aap ghazal likhne k khwahaan hain tu tu bas zara qafeye radeef ka khayal kar lain tu behtreen kalaam samney aay ga kyu k aap k haan khayal aur alfaaz odno kamal k hain ![]() umeed hai humarey nanhey sey mashware ka bura na mana jay ga ... ba sourat-e degar hum is k leye mazrat khwah hain paishgi ![]() bohat khush raheye aur likhtey raheye
__________________ hai zindagi sey nibah mumkin!!!! Main zindagi sey nibha rahi hoon Hai us nay pocha udaas ho tum! main tunziya muskura rahi hoon Shagufta Basit |
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#3
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shagufta jii adab arz hai pahly baat to yah hai kai mai in tamam batoon sai baebahra hoon bus jub likhta hoon to likh daita hoon mai nai is ko ghazal is liyay kaha kai kuch to kahna hi tha or nazam mujhe ko khud hi nahin lagi is liyay lihaza han mujhaie chaiyay tha kai is ko others kah daita app ka nanha sa mashwara bhi dewar griadainay kai liyay kafi hai khush rahiyay app bhi or mashwaray daitay rahiyay wassalam meer |
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| very beautiful.
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#5
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| janab acha khayal hai .. keep writing @};- khush rahooo ![]()
__________________ ![]() Shayad Yai Taqabor Ki Saza Mujh Ko Meli Hai Bari Shaan Sai Ubhra Tha Ab Doob Raha HoN |
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#6
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| wahh janab.. khoob likha.. Bohat si daad hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. @};- wafa aur dua ke saath withlove @};-
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#8
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| buhat khub................ ........
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#9
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| hmmm... acha likha ...... ![]()
__________________ Wo jo shakhs tha wo kitab tha, so kitab jaisay bikhar gae Wo jo khwab thay wo azab thay, so azab jaisay thehr gaye |