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This is a discussion on Karb !!!!! within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Asalaam -o-aLikum !!! Kaafi dinu baad mauqa mila tha pursoon kuch likhne ka... thanx to Strawberry and Aapo0o ... Aapo0o ...
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| Asalaam -o-aLikum !!! Kaafi dinu baad mauqa mila tha pursoon kuch likhne ka... thanx to Strawberry and Aapo0o ... Aapo0o ka thuppa tao lagna tao bas Laaazim hai ... kyun aapo0o :D ... Love u .. . !! hmm !! tao yeh leejiey ... intezaar raheyga aap logon k comments ka intezaar raheyga wuh os ka rung-e-hina sajana wafa ki nazuk hatheliyoon per phir ik ada se yuN naam likhna kooray kaaguz ki sitaah per meri jafa ki saa'aaton mein tashna lub pe dowa sajana keh kush rahoon main jahaan bhi jaaon....... na bhool paaon ! chiragh ankhaiN ... !!! ju phoot'ti thien... ju bheegti thien... lipat keh mujh say .. !!! bichar keh ab wo ujur rahi hien... ....... sawaal ankhien ju poochti hien wafa ko her pal jo khojti hai main un say aisay yeh kaisay kehdoon tera nahi ab !!! Main kaisay kehdoon keh qalb-o-jaan se guzar chuka hai yeh karb hud se bhi burh chuka hai yeh daulut-e-ghum main kaisay baanton ? main kaisay kehdoon keh khoo chuka hoon !! main kaisay kehdoon keh roo chuka hoon !!!
__________________ teRe khyaL se bach kar bata kahan JaOn Yahan sakoot bhi teRi sadaOn Jesa hai ... Last edited by ~Biya~; 12-21-2005 at 05:43 AM. |
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| wow Biya......bohat khobsorat nazam hai.... 3 especially.....is kay akhri chand misay........ ![]() sawaal ankhien ju poochti hien wafa ko her pal jo khojti hai main un say aisay yeh kaisay kehdoon tera nahi ab !!! Main kaisay kehdoon keh qalb-o-jaan se guzar chuka hai yeh karb hud se bhi burh chuka hai yeh daulut-e-ghum main kaisay baanton ? main kaisay kehdoon keh khoo chuka hoon !! main kaisay kehdoon keh roo chuka hoon !!! wahh......superb.... ....chaaa gaiiiiii hooo aappp...... ![]() luv u...... ![]() aisay hi likhti rahoo........@};-
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#3
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| Bohut hi khub likha hai Biya janu Khush raho
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#4
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![]() Well, another off the shelf contribution... Bohot gehri baat keh geyi ho tum....is ka undaza mujhe ab ho reha hai...bohot hi gehri.... Khush reho yara ....aur issi terha apne dil ka haal bayan kerti reha kero... Muskurati reho Tumhara Bhai ... ![]() |
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acha likha hai aap ne 3 :clap6 :clap6 :clap6 kush raho buhat
__________________ Ek Aah Bhari Ho Ghi Hum Ne Na Suni Ho Ghi Jate Jate Tum Ne Awaaz Tu Di Ho Ghi ![]() Sukh Da Koi Saa Na Avey...? |
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#6
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wah kiya baat hai ....bohat khoob likha iss bar bhi hamisha ki tarha ! 3
__________________ ISS LIAY KOI ZIADAA NAHI RUKKTA HAI YAHAN....... LOWG KEHTAY HEIN MERAY DIL PE TERA SAYA HAI ! |
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#7
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| veRy NiCe Biya ............... Keep writing & Sharing wid Us ... (smile) ...
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| wahhhh .... bohat khoooooob .........
__________________ Wo jo shakhs tha wo kitab tha, so kitab jaisay bikhar gae Wo jo khwab thay wo azab thay, so azab jaisay thehr gaye |