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RulesThis is a discussion on Karain Tu Kya Ab, Humain Batao within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; wo saarey lamhey gulaal lamhey humari raah main gulaab thamey kharey howe they na janey kyu kar ujar gai hain? ...
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#1
10-11-2005, 03:32 AM
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wo saarey lamhey gulaal lamhey humari raah main gulaab thamey kharey howe they na janey kyu kar ujar gai hain? karain tu kya ab! humain batao wo saarey lamhey humarey ghar ki hi dev'ri per they haath jorey kharey howe wo jo muskura k humari janib hi dekhtey they wo sar-jukaay guzar gai kyu? karain tu kya ab? humain batao wo saarey lamhey humarey khwaboo.n ki chokhatoo per jo bail botey saja rahey they na jane kyu kar wo ab humarey hi rastoo main ye khaar kantey uga rahey hain karain tu kya ab? humain batao humain batao k hum wo saarey gullal lamhey kahan sey lain wo sarey lamhey jo humarey hi ghar ki choti si dev'rhi per, humarey khwaboo ki chokhatoo per tumharey aaney k muntazir they bikhar gai hain karain tu kya ab humain batao!!!!!!!!!!! --------------- Shagufta Saleem 11th Oct, 2005.
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10-11-2005, 03:37 AM
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Salam wow shagufta bajiiiiiiii kia hogya Aap ko?itni jaldi jaldi or itna acha kase likhne lagi hain Aap? sach bohat acha likha no mistale ek dam perfect 1.gif ")1") humarey ghar ki hi dev'ri per yeh kea likha yeh samjh nahi aya.. wese nazm main ek alag touch hai haina bohat acha likha khush rahyee
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10-11-2005, 03:43 AM
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Shagufta sab khair tu hai na.. yeah itna ghamnaaaaaaaaaak andaaz kam kam dikhta hai aap ke shairee mein... acha laga... @};-Wa.Salam
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10-11-2005, 04:11 AM
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Humain butaao... NIce....and very nostalgic.... Jeeti Rehain....kabhi chote bhi aisi dua de liya kerte hain |
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10-11-2005, 04:25 AM
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Shagufta aapii waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa h ... Kya khoob ravaanii hai nazam meN ... Ravaanii barqaraar rakhnay k saath saath alfaaz ka chunao bhii bohot khoob hai ... Aur to aur aapkii aalaa darja kii fikr ne to chaar chaand lagaa diay ... Inii pyaarii nazam kehnay per apne ghareeb bhaii kii jaanib se daad qubool keejiay :clap6  3 :-v Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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10-11-2005, 11:14 AM
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wow,bahot achhe shagufta sis,bahot khoobsurat nazm,bahot daad qabool kijiye, bahot khush rahiye.
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10-11-2005, 11:22 AM
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nazm bey hadh khoobsurat hey khayal anokha sa hey acha laga @};- magar hamain batao ye gulal kia hota hey ? :-S main ney pehli bar ye lafz suna hey ...
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10-11-2005, 04:38 PM
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karain tau kia ab hamain batao ..! Bohat hi Achi nazam hay . @};- |
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