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10-11-2008, 06:09 PM
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kaisy mumkin hay kisi ankh pay pehray rakhna khushk palkoon kay talay khawab sunaihray rakhna kaisy mumkin hay milay abla paii ko muraad us ka kehna tha rukh-e-yar pay sehray rakhna ye tu her haal main hay shaiva-e-arbab-e-wafa us ki yadoon ki nishaa'n aur bhi gehray rakhna hum ko ata hi nahi ye hunar shehar-e-wafa ik chehray pay hazaroon naye chehray rakhna tum jo rakho gay sameer apnay taluk dohray her taluk kay liye dard bhi dohray rakhna                  |
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10-11-2008, 11:12 PM
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tum jo rakho gay sameer apnay taluk dohray her taluk kay liye dard bhi dohray rakhna buhut hi umdahhhhhhhhhhh ghazal janab daad qabool kijiye
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10-12-2008, 03:53 PM
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aap ki ghazal ki head line ne mutwajah kiya,aor ghazal paRhney chala aaya,ghazal paRhney ke baad aek qaari ki hasiyat se jo mehsoos kiya woh likh raha hooN,agar koyi baat nagawaar guzrey to us ke liye peishgi ma.azarat, 1.gif ")1") aap ke khayaal achhey haiN,aor andaaz bhi munfard hai,alfaaz ka istamaal bhi khoob hai,lekin mujhey aap ke ashaar main rabt ki kami mehsoos huyi,yehni donoN misroN ka baahami rabt kamzor hai,agar aap us ko thora behtar kar sakain to yaqeenan bahot khoobsurat ghazal ho gi, yeh aek qaari ki hasiyat se merey taasaraat haiN,umeed karta hoon aap mind naheen karaiN ge, bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
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10-13-2008, 05:35 AM
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achi kaavish hai sameer bhai, bas zara zain sahib ke mashwaron per ghor kijye ga. khush rahiye. Zemir.
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10-13-2008, 11:16 AM
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Everything is perfect!!!!! aur har Shair lajawaab hai!!!!!!!!!!! Amazingly Superb!!!!! i will wait to read more stuff frm ur side
__________________ Ham apne is mizaj mei kisi k bhi na ho sake Kisi se ham mile nahi,Kisi se dil mila nahi.. |
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10-21-2008, 10:51 AM
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Assalamoalaikum wr wb nice one... alfaz ka bohat acha istemal.... keep sharing |
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