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Old 12-09-2005, 05:18 AM
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Aslam o alaikum to all.. eik baar phir hazir hoo'n aur aap logo'n ki raye janne ki muntazir bhi

kabhi manzil nahi milti ' kabhi rusta nahi milta
musafir jo bhatak jayei'n unhei'n pursa nahi milta

koi to raah sujhai de mujhe apni manzil ki
chaya woh andhera ke koi nuqta nahi milta

teri batei'n,teri khushbu,teri chahat,teri ulfat
mujhe to koi bhi is sheher mei'n tujh sa nahi milta

khulie'n jub se meri aankhei'n is such ki duniya mei'n
meri ankho'n ko koi narm sa sapna nahi milta

wasl ki aarzoo mei'n jaa'n ba-labb ho jayei'n ge aakhir
Jharna hum hijr ke maro'n ko kabhi khilna nahi milta

bohat milte hai'n yaa'n per chahne wale mujhe lekin
mila yeh dil jaha'n woh hi mera sajna nahi milta

teh jub ho gaya apni judai hai naseebo'n mei'n
to phir kiu'n be-karaa'n jazbo'n ko thamna nahi milta

yaha'n her baat tulti hai lafzo'n ke tarazoo mei'n
samajh le teri chup Jharna koi aisa nahi milta

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Originally Posted by strawberry
Aslam o alaikum to all.. eik baar phir hazir hoo'n aur aap logo'n ki raye janne ki muntazir bhi

kabhi manzil nahi milti ' kabhi rusta nahi milta
musafir jo bhatak jayei'n unhei'n pursa nahi milta

koi to raah sujhai de mujhe apni manzil ki
chaya woh andhera ke koi nuqta nahi milta

teri batei'n,teri khushbu,teri chahat,teri ulfat
mujhe to koi bhi is sheher mei'n tujh sa nahi milta

khulie'n jub se meri aankhei'n is such ki duniya mei'n
meri ankho'n ko koi narm sa sapna nahi milta

wasl ki aarzoo mei'n jaa'n ba-labb ho jayei'n ge aakhir
Jharna hum hijr ke maro'n ko kabhi khilna nahi milta

bohat milte hai'n yaa'n per chahne wale mujhe lekin
mila yeh dil jaha'n woh hi mera sajna nahi milta

teh jub ho gaya apni judai hai naseebo'n mei'n
to phir kiu'n be-karaa'n jazbo'n ko thamna nahi milta

yaha'n her baat tulti hai lafzo'n ke tarazoo mei'n
samajh le teri chup Jharna koi aisa nahi milta



Wah kya andaaz e bayaan hai ... Bohot lutf aayaa paRh.ker ... Daad qubool kero :clap6 3

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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teri batei'n,teri khushbu,teri chahat,teri ulfat
mujhe to koi bhi is sheher mei'n tujh sa nahi milta


wah wah bohat khobsoorat...khatti meethi...chaa gai hooo......


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Wah kya andaaz e bayaan hai ... Bohot lutf aayaa paRh.ker ... Daad qubool kero :clap6 3

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aap ke mayar per puri utri .. parh ker khushi hui .. sarahne kelie bohat shukria mile
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teri batei'n,teri khushbu,teri chahat,teri ulfat
mujhe to koi bhi is sheher mei'n tujh sa nahi milta


wah wah bohat khobsoorat...khatti meethi...chaa gai hooo......


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Aslam o alaikum to all.. eik baar phir hazir hoo'n aur aap logo'n ki raye janne ki muntazir bhi

kabhi manzil nahi milti ' kabhi rusta nahi milta
musafir jo bhatak jayei'n unhei'n pursa nahi milta

koi to raah sujhai de mujhe apni manzil ki
chaya woh andhera ke koi nuqta nahi milta

teri batei'n,teri khushbu,teri chahat,teri ulfat
mujhe to koi bhi is sheher mei'n tujh sa nahi milta

khulie'n jub se meri aankhei'n is such ki duniya mei'n
meri ankho'n ko koi narm sa sapna nahi milta

wasl ki aarzoo mei'n jaa'n ba-labb ho jayei'n ge aakhir
Jharna hum hijr ke maro'n ko kabhi khilna nahi milta

bohat milte hai'n yaa'n per chahne wale mujhe lekin
mila yeh dil jaha'n woh hi mera sajna nahi milta

teh jub ho gaya apni judai hai naseebo'n mei'n
to phir kiu'n be-karaa'n jazbo'n ko thamna nahi milta

yaha'n her baat tulti hai lafzo'n ke tarazoo mei'n
samajh le teri chup Jharna koi aisa nahi milta

yaha'n her baat tulti hai lafzo'n ke tarazoo mei'n
samajh le teri chup Jharna koi aisa nahi milta

wah kia andaz hay
boht khobsorat lafaz
munfard lehja
boht daad qabool kijeay
ik baat ki taraf tawaja dilana chahta hoo
5th stanza main ''jharna'' kia aap ka takhalus hay ?
to janab takhalus ghazal kay aakhri misray main aata hay
umeen hay yeh chooti see tanqeed aap ko nagawar nahin lagay gi
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khulie'n jub se meri aankhei'n is such ki duniya mei'n
meri ankho'n ko koi narm sa sapna nahi milta


bauhat hi umdah ghazal likhi hai bacha

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wah .. beyhud khusbuiret... tum mien potential hai.. me ko nahi maloom tha... buhat khubsuret. .. !!
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