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This is a discussion on kabhi jo zeest main aaya muqaam-e-dilshikni within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ASLAAM O ALEKUM, kesey mizaaj hain dosto? umeed hai bakher honge, lijiye aek baar phir ,aek nayi ghazal ke saath ...
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#1
09-07-2007, 07:47 PM
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ASLAAM O ALEKUM, kesey mizaaj hain dosto? umeed hai bakher honge, 1.gif ")1") lijiye aek baar phir ,aek nayi ghazal ke saath aap ke zoq ko aazmaaney aa pohancha,umeed hai bardaasht karain ge, is ghazal ka mayaar kaya raha,is ka andaaza aap ki aara se hi ho sakey ga,so apni bahot qeemati aara se zaroor nawaaziye ga,intazaar rahey ga, bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye, 
__________________  Last edited by zain; 09-07-2007 at 11:28 PM.         |
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#2
09-07-2007, 08:05 PM
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zain ji meri eik ghazam mein hymwatan joor ke likha gaya tha jis pe pakistan ke adabi halqoon ne eitraaz kiya hai ke adab mein baham likhna ghalar hai tab muje hum watan likhna para is se pehle ke aap pe eitraaz ho dilshikni alehda kar dijiye aur isse dil shikni likhye muhabatoon ke saath qamar
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#3
09-07-2007, 08:27 PM
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hamain b shoq tha jeenay ka par ye jam-e-zehar labon se hm ne lagaya banam-e-dilshikni....wowww zain ji aaj kal to aap bohat fast ja rahay hain...bohat acha acha likh rhay hain pori ghazal shandar hai but iss shair...ne bohat der ...sath rakha..khush rahin likhtay rahin
__________________  MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...!  |
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#4
09-07-2007, 09:30 PM
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walikum asalam.. kia bat hai janab zain-ul-deen zaidaan sahab... bohat hi umda ghazal kahi apne... bohat umdagi say nibhai apne yeh mushkil zameen.. bohat khush rahiye
__________________  . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! |
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#5
09-07-2007, 09:33 PM
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 .. iski koi khas wajha ... shukriya Qamar bhai... mere bhi ilm maiN izafa huwa... khush rahiye
__________________ . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! |
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#6
09-07-2007, 09:52 PM
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very nice Zain bahi hamesha ki taran yeh gazal bhi bohat aachi lagi bohat sari daad qabool kijeye khush rahyee
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09-07-2007, 11:32 PM
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 lijiye janaab,ham ne ghazal edit kar di, rahnumaayi ke liye shukriya,.........we sey achha lagey ga agar aap mazeed is par kuchh roshani daalain,ke aek saath likhney se kaya farq parta hai,umeed hai aap apne tajurbey ki roshani main is par mazeed kuch roshani daalain ge, bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
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#8
09-07-2007, 11:35 PM
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bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
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#9
09-08-2007, 04:07 AM
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wah .. zain ji .. itni umdagi se aapne is mushkil radeef k saath nazm kahi .. aur her her shair bohat hi be-sakhta sa mehsoos ho raha hai, jaise likhte hue kisi diqqat ka samna na kerna paRa ho .. tamam asha'ar ke mazameen bhi be-hadd pasand aaye ghazal her lehaz se mukammal mehsoos hui is behtreen takhleeq per bohat sari daad qubool kijiye khush rahiye sadaa
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#10
09-08-2007, 07:41 AM
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kaheen bhi Zain main jaoon badal na paaye samaan Yun dil main thehr gai hai wo shaam-e-dilshikni Bohot khoob...bohot umdai hai ji...bohot saari daad hazir hai |
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