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Old 11-18-2006, 06:25 PM
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kabhi bicher k uss say

kabhi bicher k uss say kabhi us say mil k roya
kabhi jata k muhabat kabhi usay hum azma k roya

muhabat ki raho main jab hijer k azab milay
kabhi dil ki baybasi per kabhi saber ki hum intha per roya

khuwab tooyt k bikhr gay jab ankho ki mundayr per
kabhi zindagi say gila kabhi mot ki hum duwa ker k roya

duniya k jahmaylo main jab khud ko bhula baytthay
kabi band kamro main kabhi saray mahfil hum tooyt k roya

kaisay zabt rakh patay inn ashko per hum hassan
kabhi mil k apno say kabhi apnay ap say hum mil k roya
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Old 11-18-2006, 06:35 PM
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achhi koshish hai Shazlay saahiba,lekin abhi bahot mehnat ki zaroorat hai,so mashq jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH behtari aaye gi kalaam main,
bahot khush rahiye,
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Asslamamo alikum shazley waah janaba kiya kehnebohut khub soorat andaz main likha aap ne
kabhi jata k muhabat kabhi usay hum azma k roya
waaaaaaah magar yeh aap ne apne miyaon ji ka naam

takhuls main kiyon istemaal kiya is baar to aap ki apni hi
kavish haia na to... ?
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Old 11-18-2006, 11:30 PM
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Khayaal Bouhat Umda Hay... Rida Ji Ki Baat Mai'n Bhi Dohrau'n Gi Kay Aap Nay Apna Takhallus Use Nahi Kiya Hay Likhna Jaari Rakhiye Aap Masha Allah Bouhat Ba'Salahiyat Hai'n.... Bouhat Khush Rahiye
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Achi kavish hai lekin mujhay ye perdh ker koi poorana song kun yaad aa raha hai :thinking
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bohat khoob likha hai
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Old 11-20-2006, 04:07 PM
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hmmm ,,shazlay ,,,maza nahi aaya,,khiyaal acha thay,,laikin lefzon ki bunat ho nahi saki,,,,koshish jaari rekho,,,,,boht achi kawish hay aapki,,theek hojaiy gi,,,ye zaroor batana is ghazal main ye hum q aaya hay....boht si daad k saath shukria,,,
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kabhi bicher k uss say

kabhi bicher k uss say kabhi us say mil k roya
kabhi jata k muhabat kabhi usay hum azma k roya

muhabat ki raho main jab hijer k azab milay
kabhi dil ki baybasi per kabhi saber ki hum intha per roya

khuwab tooyt k bikhr gay jab ankho ki mundayr per
kabhi zindagi say gila kabhi mot ki hum duwa ker k roya

duniya k jahmaylo main jab khud ko bhula baytthay
kabi band kamro main kabhi saray mahfil hum tooyt k roya

kaisay zabt rakh patay inn ashko per hum hassan
kabhi mil k apno say kabhi apnay ap say hum mil k roya

janab main aap kay kiss kiss shair ki tareef keroo her shair apni hagha kamal ka tha aik aik shair aik say bher kay hai
i will just say (very good) bcoz i have not found any proper word for you and your poem

boht bohat ziada duaaon kay sath
jahan rahian bohat khush rahin
imran
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achi ghazal thee janab
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