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This is a discussion on kabhi bicher k uss say within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; kabhi bicher k uss say kabhi bicher k uss say kabhi us say mil k roya kabhi jata k muhabat ...
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| kabhi bicher k uss say kabhi bicher k uss say kabhi us say mil k roya kabhi jata k muhabat kabhi usay hum azma k roya muhabat ki raho main jab hijer k azab milay kabhi dil ki baybasi per kabhi saber ki hum intha per roya khuwab tooyt k bikhr gay jab ankho ki mundayr per kabhi zindagi say gila kabhi mot ki hum duwa ker k roya duniya k jahmaylo main jab khud ko bhula baytthay kabi band kamro main kabhi saray mahfil hum tooyt k roya kaisay zabt rakh patay inn ashko per hum hassan kabhi mil k apno say kabhi apnay ap say hum mil k roya
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#2
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| achhi koshish hai Shazlay saahiba,lekin abhi bahot mehnat ki zaroorat hai,so mashq jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH behtari aaye gi kalaam main, ![]() bahot khush rahiye, ![]()
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#3
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| Asslamamo alikum shazley waah janaba kiya kehnebohut khub soorat andaz main likha aap ne kabhi jata k muhabat kabhi usay hum azma k roya waaaaaaah magar yeh aap ne apne miyaon ji ka naam takhuls main kiyon istemaal kiya is baar to aap ki apni hi kavish haia na to... ?
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#4
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Khayaal Bouhat Umda Hay... Rida Ji Ki Baat Mai'n Bhi Dohrau'n Gi Kay Aap Nay Apna Takhallus Use Nahi Kiya Hay Likhna Jaari Rakhiye Aap Masha Allah Bouhat Ba'Salahiyat Hai'n.... Bouhat Khush Rahiye ![]()
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#5
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| Achi kavish hai lekin mujhay ye perdh ker koi poorana song kun yaad aa raha hai :thinking
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#7
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| hmmm ,,shazlay ,,,maza nahi aaya,,khiyaal acha thay,,laikin lefzon ki bunat ho nahi saki,,,,koshish jaari rekho,,,,,boht achi kawish hay aapki,,theek hojaiy gi,,,ye zaroor batana is ghazal main ye hum q aaya hay....boht si daad k saath shukria,,, |
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#8
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janab main aap kay kiss kiss shair ki tareef keroo her shair apni hagha kamal ka tha aik aik shair aik say bher kay hai i will just say (very good) bcoz i have not found any proper word for you and your poem boht bohat ziada duaaon kay sath jahan rahian bohat khush rahin imran
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