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RulesThis is a discussion on Kab Itna Aasaan Hai Janaa.n within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As'salam O Alaikum, arsey baad kuch likha tu socha yahan aap sab k saath share hi kar loon, na ye ...
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03-10-2008, 03:59 PM
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As'salam O Alaikum, arsey baad kuch likha tu socha yahan aap sab k saath share hi kar loon, na ye ghazal hai na nazm............bas hai kuch kach'cha pakka sa  .................... .................... Jeevan jeena jaa.n jokhoo.n ka kaam hai janaa.n jeevan jeena kab itna aasaan hai janaa.n us ko meri aankh sey shikwa, kyu kar itna roti hai us sey kehna aansu peena kab itna aasaan hai janaa.n umaar ki akhiri seerhi per main qadam rakhoo.n tu kaise janaa.n saans charhi ho, charhna zeena kab itna aasaan hai janaa.n jaan k dushman teri aik ada pe main tu jaa.n waroo.n hont pe amrat, dil main keena, kab itna aasaan hai janaa.n merey haal pe hansney waloo.n, ishq kabhi kar k dekhoo hont seeley hon,zakhmi seena, kab itna aaasaan hai janaa.n Gufi teri wus'sat-e dil ki, dil sey main tu qail hon dil main rakhna dukh ka khazeena, kab itna aasaan hai janaa.n -------------------- Shagufta Basit 10th March, 2008
__________________ guzar hi jay gi terey baghair bhi laikin bohat udaas bohat sogwaar guzre gi Last edited by Shagufta Basit; 03-10-2008 at 04:01 PM.                  |
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03-10-2008, 05:13 PM
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bohat achay keep it up
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03-10-2008, 08:29 PM
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Pehli baar aap ki sahiri nazar say guzri hai aur pehlay shair ko chor kar jo keh aik mukhtalif behr mein hai aur wazan kay aik do masaail kay ilawa baqi ashaar na sirf yeh keh pakkay pakkay ghazal kay hain aur khayalat ki khubsurti kay saath saath aap nay aik mushkil radeef ko bari had tak kamyabi say nibhaya hai. Mashq aur mehnat say aap yaqeenan buhat acha likh sakti hain. Aik umdah kaawish par meri daad hazir hai. Anis Hasan |
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03-11-2008, 01:48 AM
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  Shagufta Ji Aap Aaj Bhi Bouhat Umdagi Say Likhti Hai'n...Mujhay Aap Ka Munfarid Andaz-e-Bayaan Bouhat Acha Laga...Bouhat Umdagi Say Likha Hay...Albatta Jaldi Mai'n Typing Ki Kuch Kami Reh Gai Hay...Bouhat Si Daad Bouhat Si Duao'n Kay Saath Qubool Kijiye...
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03-11-2008, 02:41 AM
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wah bohat khubsurat ghazal hai aur 2nd shair to kamal ka hai................b ohat se daad kabool kiejea aur khush rahian. |
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03-11-2008, 05:58 AM
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Salam Sis! Pehlay sher kay ilawa tamaam ashaar hi khobsoorat hain. Aik mushkil behar aur mushkil radeef ko kamal khoobi se nibhaya hai tum ne. Khush raho 
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03-11-2008, 06:51 AM
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hont seeley hon,zakhmi seena, kab itna aaasaan hai janaa.n Wahhhhhh......beshak , chand ek technical masaayel hain warna, behad khubsoorat bulke behtreen ghazal hai, koshish karen ke technical errors ko remove kar ke poori ghazal ko ek behr main le aayen......
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03-11-2008, 08:23 AM
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jaan k dushman teri aik ada pe main tu jaa.n waroo.n hont pe amrat, dil main keena, kab itna aasaan hai janaa.n wha buhat umdha
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