Urdu Poetry Forum

**WanderingThoughts** · #1 10-23-2007, 12:56 PM

as-salam-o-alaikum dosto,

aik bar phir ap ki khidmat meiN aik ghazal k sath hazir huN... aur ye gahzal apny piyary dost aur is mehfil k bohat umda aur senior poet Saraabs bhai ki nazr krta huN... aaj in ki gahzal paRhi to hairan reh gya k isi radeef k sath maiN ne bhi aik ghazal kuch roz pehly kahi thi (go k maiN in ka asl nam nahi janta, mager in k kalaam meiN in ki shakhsiat ka rang jhalakta hy aur mujhy ye rang bohat acha laga hy...)

to jnab, ghazal hazir hy...

juz tark-e-ta'aluq koi chara bhi nahiN tha
bin us k mager apna guzara bhi nahiN tha

daa'way to sabhi ko thy wafadari k lekin,
ham dooby to tinkay ka sahara bhi nahiN tha.

lamhaat-e-firaaq aa'ay khaRy thy kyuN abhi se,
ham ne to abhi waqt guzara bhi nahi tha

duniya se to khair apna gila hi nahiN banta,
is dil ko mager ranj tumhara bhi nahiN tha

faizan meiN dil khol k rakhta, to kis aagy?
yaaN mujh sa koi dard ka mara bhi nahiN tha

**Saraabs** · #2 10-23-2007, 01:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts

as-salam-o-alaikum dosto,

aik bar phir ap ki khidmat meiN aik ghazal k sath hazir huN... aur ye gahzal apny piyary dost aur is mehfil k bohat umda aur senior poet Saraabs bhai ki nazr krta huN... aaj in ki gahzal paRhi to hairan reh gya k isi radeef k sath maiN ne bhi aik ghazal kuch roz pehly kahi thi (go k maiN in ka asl nam nahi janta, mager in k kalaam meiN in ki shakhsiat ka rang jhalakta hy aur mujhy ye rang bohat acha laga hy...)

to jnab, ghazal hazir hy...

juz tark-e-ta'aluq koi chara bhi nahiN tha
bin us k mager apna guzara bhi nahiN tha

daa'way to sabhi ko thy wafadari k lekin,
ham dooby to tinkay ka sahara bhi nahiN tha.

lamhaat-e-firaaq aa'ay khaRy thy kyuN abhi se,
ham ne to abhi waqt guzara bhi nahi tha

duniya se to khair apna gila hi nahiN banta,
is dil ko mager ranj tumhara bhi nahiN tha

faizan meiN dil khol k rakhta, to kis aagy?
yaaN mujh sa koi dard ka mara bhi nahiN tha

Walaykum Assalam, Faizan Bhai, itni shandar ghazal is nacheez ki nazr karne per tah-e-dil se shukr guzaar hoon. Sachchi baat to ye hai ke main khud bhi hairan reh gaya hoon aur behad maza araha hai. Aisa lagta hai ke ek hi ghazal continue hogai ho. Lekin janab, kia hi baat hai aap k kahe ash'aar ki. Matla to sab hi se ziada pasand aya.

juz tark-e-ta'aluq koi chara bhi nahiN tha
bin us k mager apna guzara bhi nahiN tha

Wahhhhh....kia baat hai...bohot umda

daa'way to sabhi ko thy wafadari k lekin,
ham dooby to tinkay ka sahara bhi nahiN tha

bohot aala janab....bohot hi khoob kaha

Poori ghazal hi bohot khoob rahi....dheron daad is ki nazr hai

**dua_e_sehar** · #3 10-23-2007, 04:16 PM

very nice .................... .faizan bahi bohat hi aachi gazal kahi aap ne

**yasmin ahmad** · #4 10-23-2007, 09:01 PM

bohat khub Faizaan dosra shair bohat undah hai..........khush rahian

**13 Mera 7 Rhey** · #5 10-23-2007, 09:36 PM

kubsurat sharing bro ......... masha allah dad qabool ho ...

**kanwal Hussain** · #6 10-24-2007, 03:46 AM

lamhaat-e-firaaq aa'ay khaRy thy kyuN abhi se,
ham ne to abhi waqt guzara bhi nahi tha
wahh......bohat khob hai ji....ye shair bohat acha hai
bohat khush rahin likhtay rahin....

**aas awan** · #7 10-24-2007, 12:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts

as-salam-o-alaikum dosto,

aik bar phir ap ki khidmat meiN aik ghazal k sath hazir huN... aur ye gahzal apny piyary dost aur is mehfil k bohat umda aur senior poet Saraabs bhai ki nazr krta huN... aaj in ki gahzal paRhi to hairan reh gya k isi radeef k sath maiN ne bhi aik ghazal kuch roz pehly kahi thi (go k maiN in ka asl nam nahi janta, mager in k kalaam meiN in ki shakhsiat ka rang jhalakta hy aur mujhy ye rang bohat acha laga hy...)

to jnab, ghazal hazir hy...

juz tark-e-ta'aluq koi chara bhi nahiN tha
bin us k mager apna guzara bhi nahiN tha

daa'way to sabhi ko thy wafadari k lekin,
ham dooby to tinkay ka sahara bhi nahiN tha.

lamhaat-e-firaaq aa'ay khaRy thy kyuN abhi se,
ham ne to abhi waqt guzara bhi nahi tha

duniya se to khair apna gila hi nahiN banta,
is dil ko mager ranj tumhara bhi nahiN tha

faizan meiN dil khol k rakhta, to kis aagy?
yaaN mujh sa koi dard ka mara bhi nahiN tha

bohut khoob Faizan bhai
bohut hi accha likha hai
her shair apni juga bohut accha hai
Allah mola khush rukhay aap ko
meray liye bi dua kerain