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Old 11-03-2007, 02:41 PM
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juz tark-e-ta'aluq koi chara bhi nahiN tha
bin us k mager apna guzara bhi nahiN tha

Wah yeh shair kuch aisa laga jesay puranay waqton main
koi dastan goo mutasir kun andaz main apni dastan ka aghaz karta
ho or sun'nay walay hamatan gosh ho jatay haon.
daa'way to sabhi ko thy wafadari k lekin,
ham dooby to tinkay ka sahara bhi nahiN tha.

yahan aap nay mohawaray ko jis khobsorti say istamal kia
woh qabil e daad hay
lamhaat-e-firaaq aa'ay khaRy thy kyuN abhi se,
ham ne to abhi waqt guzara bhi nahi tha

wah janab yahan mujhay khalid alaig ka ik shair yad aa gia
Andaz e janoon yeh ham nay ishq say seekhay hain
laay faryad ki dheemi loo deep ki madham rakhna

dheema dheema nami main dooba hoa lehja boht khoob.
is ghazal nay boht mutasir kia kush rahain
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daa'way to sabhi ko thy wafadari k lekin,
ham dooby to tinkay ka sahara bhi nahiN tha.

Buhat Khoob Likha Hia,

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Aap Ki Likhi Is Khoobsurat Ghazal Kay Her Shair Nay Bouhat Mutasir Kiya...Is Umda Ghazal Kay Liye Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...Sada Khush Rahiye...
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thats realy great!!
best of luck for more best
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Faizan Bhai
Boht umda takhleeq hay MashaAllah
aap say isi tarah ki tawaqqu ki jasakti hay

boht khush rahiay aor boht acha likhtay rahiay

azam
Aazam bhai bohat mamnun huN k aap ne ghazal paRhi aur isy pasand kiya....
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walikum asalam..

wahhhh wahhhh... bohat hi khubsoorat ghazal hai janab... har shair bohat umda hai... bohat hi khoob.. dhairoN dad meri taraf say..

itni khubsoorat zameen hai...mere bhi hathoN maiN kharish ho rahi hai

khush rahiye bohat
mehroo bohat shukriya ghazal paRhny aur pasand krny ka, is qadar hosla-afzaei k li'ye mamnun huN... Allah Taala aapko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...

ager hathoN meiN kharish hy to dhoo aao, btany ki kya zuroorat hy...
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bohat khoob.........

ghazal hamaysha ki tarhan khobsurat kahi faizan aap nay...........

keep sharing
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