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RulesThis is a discussion on jung hum se sargoshi karti hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; hum jonobi asia kay rah gum kardah mosafir hum nay apnay aap ko bach ker hathyaar khariday aur humesha apnay ...
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#1
09-24-2008, 06:24 PM
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hum jonobi asia kay rah gum kardah mosafir hum nay apnay aap ko bach ker hathyaar khariday aur humesha apnay bhookay bachoon per lashker ko tarjee di hai aur ab humaray sahmay howay angano main morchay reengtay hain aur jung ki khon aasham bhati humaray tazah jismoon ko lalchai hoi nazroon se dakhti hai jung................ mazakrat maze ki oth se hum se sargoshi karti hai aur wo faqa zadah qabrostan rengtay rengtay howay humaray shahar ki dewar se alaga hai humari na umed ankh ki shakh per dosti aur khush hali ka khowab gulab ki phool ki manind morjha raha hai meray laho main her lamha wo lamha jagta hai jab lashker rakh hoti hoi ankho kay samnay husun aur zindagi ko bay dardi kay sath rond dalain gay tou fath aur moftha ka faisla karnay kay lian sirf moth aur zindagi baqi ho gi mehwish afsar                  |
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09-24-2008, 09:42 PM
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buhut khoob mehwish acha likhti hain aap buhut khush rahiye shear karny k liye shukriya
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09-24-2008, 10:49 PM
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Assalam o alaikum thank u so much aap ko mera andaz-e-bayan acha laga. Take care.. Mehwish afsar |
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09-24-2008, 10:49 PM
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Assalam o alaikum thank u so much aap ko mera andaz-e-bayan acha laga.yooun hi rahnomai karti rahya ga. Take care.. Mehwish afsar |
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09-24-2008, 10:49 PM
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very nice ,.........keep writing nd sharing,....... |
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09-25-2008, 03:18 AM
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jab lashker rakh hoti hoi ankho kay samnay husun aur zindagi ko bay dardi kay sath rond dalain gay tou fath aur moftha ka faisla karnay kay lian sirf moth aur zindagi baqi ho gi nice................ ........... |
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