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Old 08-03-2007, 01:08 PM
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Default jub tum mujh se payar karte te

Aslamoalaikum kaise ho aap sub

who din kitne suhane te jub hum sath raha karte te

sari subhain sari shamian hum sath bitaya karte te

meri her ahat pe tum chonk jaya karte te

kabhi jo khud ko tanha pati tum mera saya ho jaya karte te

dukh mujh tak puhanche is se pehle tum meri

dhal bun jaya karte te

kabhi jo gum_e_dunya se ghabra jati tu

meri dharas bandhaya karte te

tumhare lafz mujhe ruswa na kar dain yehi such k

chup ho jaya karte te

main jo tarang main a kar shukh jumla keh deti tu

rooh tak sarshaar ho jaya karte te

bahri mehfil main nazrain chupa k sub se

mujhe dekha karte te

aur phir meri ankhoon main aapna akas na pa

kar khud se uljha karte te

meri khushiyoon main tum aapni khushiaan talasha

karte te

meri ik ah pe ghantoon be chain raha karte te

jub bhi main khud ko sanwara karti tu

ankhoon hi ankhoon main meri nazar utara karte te

koi mujhe tum se chean na le isi khaf main

beqara raha karte te

aapne rub se duaon main tum mujhe manga karte te

who din kitne suhane te jub tum mujh se payar karte te

mere faqat mere huwa karte te

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phir kya howa? ye tu likha nahi..... maza aa raha tha pharnay ka magar end nahi howa
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Acha likha aap ne yunhi likhte rahain.............A llah pak aap ko hamaisha khush rakhe.
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walikum asalam...

umda khayalat ko nazm ki soorat maiN dhaala tumne... v nice..

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achi koshish apki....nice
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phir kya howa? ye tu likha nahi..... maza aa raha tha pharnay ka magar end nahi howa
puch k bataoon gi kya huwa............ha ha ha
anyways aap ka bohat shukar y aap ne read kya aur pasand kya thanks
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Acha likha aap ne yunhi likhte rahain.............A llah pak aap ko hamaisha khush rakhe.
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walikum asalam...

umda khayalat ko nazm ki soorat maiN dhaala tumne... v nice..

khus raho

thanks mehroo sis aap ko aacha laga khushi hoi
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