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Old 02-05-2008, 10:12 PM
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ehl.e.bazm adaab

buhot arse se is forum per hoon lekin koshish k bavajood kuch post na kar payee..

aaj jab kuch waqt apni tamamtar raftaar k saath joh mere haath laga toh mainay soch kyun na lagay hathoN waqt k haath se kuch lamhaiN apne naam karliya jaye..
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aur phir buhot sochne k baad jab kuch samajh hi na aya toh mainay kisi terah ek kuch arsa pehle likhi hui ghazal yahan post karne ka irada karliya hai aur is umeed per k aap sab bhi waqt k haath se kuch lamhaiN meri ghazal k naam kar hi jayeNgaiN..

shukriya.

joh tum tak chal k atay haiN toh anay do
khushi se jaaN lutatay haiN lutanay do

nazar joh hum milatay haiN milanay do
zara kuch shoor jazboN me machanay do

suno jeevan meray hi naam kardo tum
joh meri yaad aati hai toh anay do

sulagte dil ki thandak hai haNsi teri
tujhe joh hum haNsatay haiN haNsanay do

suno hum ishq karlaiN gaiN magar pehle
siray se apni hasti toh mitanay do

hamara aaj janay kal me kya laye
galay apnoN k lagne do laganay do

mukafaat.e.amal barhaq hai sunlo 'Gul'
joh teri jaaN jalatay haiN jalanay do.
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Old 02-06-2008, 03:19 AM
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bohat undah...............
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suno hum ishq karlaiN gaiN magar pehle
siray se apni hasti toh mitanay do

Wah jee wah...bohot umda ghazal kahi hai mashaAllaha aur khaas kar ke ye shaire to bohot hi pasand aya.....jeeti rahye aur likhti rahye
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bohat undah...............
buhot shukriya..
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Old 02-06-2008, 11:02 AM
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suno hum ishq karlaiN gaiN magar pehle
siray se apni hasti toh mitanay do

Wah jee wah...bohot umda ghazal kahi hai mashaAllaha aur khaas kar ke ye shaire to bohot hi pasand aya.....jeeti rahye aur likhti rahye
buhot shukriya k aapne mujhe apni qeemti ra'i se navaza hai...aur rahi baat likhne ki toh jab tak jeeti rahongi ..likhti rahongi...
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bohat khoob gul sahiba is ghazal se bohat se gul khiladye aap ne
apna khayal rakhyega
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agarchay aap old member haiN.. magar chooN k mehfil maiN pehli martaba daikh rahi hooN aapko.. so... khush amdeed..

suno hum ishq karlaiN gaiN magar pehle
siray se apni hasti toh mitanay do

bohat khubsoorat kawish rahi aapki.. bohat si dad qubool kijiye.. umeed hai ab aati rahaiN gi..

khush rahiye
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welcome....
suno hum ishq karlaiN gaiN magar pehle
siray se apni hasti toh mitanay do
wah...bohat umdah khyal likhti rahin khsh rahin
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bohat khoob gul sahiba is ghazal se bohat se gul khiladye aap ne
apna khayal rakhyega
shukriya cute ji gul toh khil hi gaye hain aap sab ki hausla afzayee ki surat me joh kafi 'cute' se haiN ..

aap bhi rakhaiN.