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Jo Khuaab Ham Ko Thay Pyaray, Zamee'n Pay Aa Kay Rahay

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Old 04-02-2008, 03:40 PM
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Mai'n Nay Life Mai'n 1st Time '' Tarhi Ghazal '' Likhnay Ki Koshish Ki Hay...

Mods Plz Mairay Section Mai'n Yeh Ghazal Bhi Laga Dijiye......

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bohat khoobsort haya .....
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bohat khubsurat.........da ad ke saath bohat khush rahain
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leN ji aap ki ghazal laga di gaei hy aap k section meiN

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bohat umda kawish hai Haya... aur yeh shikayat k tumne pehli martaba kiyoN likhi tarahi ghazal?.. itni khubsoorat shayera ko to har mah hisa laina chahiye..

zameen khasi mushkili thi... isiliye kuch ash'ar m'ani-o-mazmoon k hisab say kamzor rahay... baqi ghazal bohat achi rahi..

jo khab hum ko thay piyaray...

wahhhh...

bohat khush raho
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wha buhat umdha sharing
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Khobsoorat kawish hai aap ki Haya ji!

DhairooN daad qabol kee jiya
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Bahut khoob...
khasa mushkil kaam kiya aap ney...lekin bahut umdgi sey...
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bahot khoob Haya ,bahot arsey baad aap ki koyi tehreer nazar se guzri,bahot achha laga par ke,
ghazal ke hawaaley se yeh kahoon ga ke radeef khaasa mushkil tha,jis ki wajah se kuchh ash.aar apna mafhoom waazeya na kar paaye,lekin majmooyi tor par yeh aek achhi koshish hai,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhti aor ham se share karti rahiye,
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