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RulesThis is a discussion on jo aag lagaataa phirtaa ho, vo aag bujhaanaa kia jaane! within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; salaam dosto, aaj maiN aapkii Khidmat meN apnii ek puraanii Ghazal pesh karne kii jasaarat kar rahaa huuN. ummeed hai ...
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11-18-2004, 02:31 PM
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salaam dosto, aaj maiN aapkii Khidmat meN apnii ek puraanii Ghazal pesh karne kii jasaarat kar rahaa huuN. ummeed hai ki aapkii tab'a-e-naazuk par baar-e-giraaN na guzregii. Hasb-e-ma'mool aapkii nazr-e-karam kii ummeed hai aur maiN aapkii aaraa aur tanqeed_o_tanqees kaa mutamanni aur muntazir rahuuNgaa. shukria. to, Ghazal mulaaHizah farmaaiye: ____________________ _____ 1. zaalim hai jafaa_kun, kam_sin hai! vo dil kaa lagaanaa kia jaane kia dil pe guzartii hai mere, be_dard zamaana kia jaane! 2. mastaana adaa se, chitvan se, aaNkhoN ke sitam_gar sho'loN se jo aag lagaataa phirtaa ho, vo aag bujhaanaa kia jaane 3. gulshan ke mahekte phooloN meN qismat ho phali phooli jiskii Takraa ke moqaddar patthar se, vo ranj uThaanaa kia jaane 4. vo Khoon-e-jigar ko pee pee kar, ma'shooq pe jal jal martaa hai vo Husn kaa shaidaa parvaana, auroN ko miTaanaa kia jaane 5. har ek ishaare par jiske qurbaan hoN laakhoN parvaane be_dard vo, "Ahmad_jii!" terii taqdeer banaanaa kia jaane                  |
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11-18-2004, 02:43 PM
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bhai app ko wahaan welcme or poem app ke bohut acche hay |
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11-18-2004, 03:22 PM
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bohat khoob... Welcome.... God bless u
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11-18-2004, 07:01 PM
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/welcome1 1.gif ")1") bauhat hi achi ghazal likhi hai aap nai /rose umeed karti hoon aap ko yahan akar acha laga hoga khush rahiyai
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11-18-2004, 07:38 PM
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AOA ko mun mouji sahab aur khush amdeed HG pe Sab sey tu itni umda Urdu likhi hay k lutf aa gaya bohat khoob janab.... per hozoor aap nay "hasb-e mamool" tu yoon istamaal kya goya hum mudad sey aap k kalam ki tareef karte aay hon  ghazal bohat umda hay kaafi ustadoo.n wala undaaz hay ..... bohat daad janab khush raheye likhte raheye
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11-18-2004, 08:08 PM
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/welcome1 keep writting friend :flower
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jo aag lagaataa phirtaa ho, vo aag bujhaanaa kia jaane! 
