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JnooN ki hadd bhi koi ho tho paar kerloonga

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Old 06-05-2008, 06:48 PM
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Assalam o Alaikum
Ap ki khidmat maiN ye adna si kawish pesh ker raha hoon
Ap sab dostoN se guzarish hai is ke bahr aur andaz-e-bayaN main apko jo bhi ghalti ya kami lagay uss main meri rehnumayi farmayeiN


JnooN ki hadd bhi koi ho tho paar kerloonga
zameeN pe chand ko maiN beqaraar kerloonga

na pooch ye ke woh kitna azeez hai mujh ko
maiN apni jaaN bhi usi pe nisaar kerloonga

mry ilawa usay kuch nazar na ayega
maiN ik nazar maiN usay itna pyaar kerloonga

woh apna hath mry hath maiN agar dede
maiN uss ki zindagi ko taabdaar kerloonga

agar bahy jo uski aankh se kabhi aaNsoo
maiN apne sham-o-seher sogwaar kerloonga

woh shakhs jesa bhi hai meray dil ko bhaaya hai
maiN khud se bharr ke uspe aithbaar kerloonga

woh aankhoN maiN sahi wada tho kergyaa mujh se
maiN sari umR usii ka intezaar kerloonga

jo baad uskay mujay gham diye zamanay ne
milega jab woh tho saray shumaar kerloonga

jahaaN wo jaayega apna waheiN safar hoga
jahaaN rukay usay apna dyaar kerloonga

maiN jo bhi kaam ho ~ihsan~ dil se kerta hooN
maiN ishq karoonga tho phir shahkaar kerloonga

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Bayhadd umdaah ghazal Ehsaan bhaee

arsay baad aap ki janib se kuch perha, yakeen janiyaa rooh takk khsh ho gaee


Khush rehiya
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agar bahy jo uski aankh se kabhi aaNsoo
maiN apne sham-o-seher sogwaar kerloonga

woh shakhs jesa bhi hai meray dil ko bhaaya hai
maiN khud se bharr ke uspe aithbaar kerloonga

very nice.
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nice ...................
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bohat undah............... .....
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bahot khoob Ihsan bhahi,achhey khayalaat baandhey aap ne,so daad qabool kijiye,
albata ghazal kuchh jald baazi ka shikaar lagi mujhey,kiyoon ke merey khayaal main aap is se kaheen ziyaada achha likhney ki salaahiyat rakhtey haiN,so agar thori si mehnat aor ho jaati to yaqeenan is se bhi ziyaada khoobsurat ghazal hoti,phir bhi bahot achha laga paR ke,
bahot khush rahiye,likhtey aor ham se share kartey rahiye,
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bahot khoob Ihsan bhahi,achhey khayalaat baandhey aap ne,so daad qabool kijiye,
albata ghazal kuchh jald baazi ka shikaar lagi mujhey,kiyoon ke merey khayaal main aap is se kaheen ziyaada achha likhney ki salaahiyat rakhtey haiN,so agar thori si mehnat aor ho jaati to yaqeenan is se bhi ziyaada khoobsurat ghazal hoti,phir bhi bahot achha laga paR ke,
bahot khush rahiye,likhtey aor ham se share kartey rahiye,
ghazal pasand kernay ka nihayat mashkoor hooN
inshallah is pe nazr sani karoonga....aur behter bananay ki koshish karoonga
hamesha khush rahiye
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buhut umdahhhhhhhhhhh
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