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Dosto! Aik arse k baad ghazal kehna ka mauqa mila ... Jaise hee tamaam huvii ghazal socha aap sab kay saath share kee jaa'ay ... Apni aaraa se zaroor navaaziayga



Dil jis ka phaNs gaya hai muHabbat kay jaal meN
KhushiyaN usee ko miltee hain runj.o.malaal meN

Farmaan hai Khudaa ka rahe yeh khayaal meN
MaaN-baap se kalaam nah kerna jalaal meN

Dekho kabhie nah phaNsna takabbor ke jaal meN
Aata hai har kamal kisee din zawaal meN

Kahne lage woh sunke sawal.e wafa mira
Posheedah hai jawab tumhaare sawaal meN

Subse ziyadah shukr ke sajde kiye adaa
Usne hi jo jiyaa tha muSeebat ke Haal meN

Woh door rah ke aur bhee mere qareeb hai
Ab dooriyaaN hii Theek haiN mere khayaal meN

Jab tak nah deN azaan woh hotii nah thee saHar
Wallaah! Kya asar tha azaan-e "Bilaal" meN

:Qassim: pahooNch gaya woh urooj.e kamal tak
Jis ne guzaari umr kisee ke malaal meN


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Dear brother: Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
Aadaab,

aap kee ghazal mashaAllah bohat dilkash zameen par hai. maZameen bhi aap ne Khoob nikaale heN aur aap ka rang-e-taghazzul bhi nikhartaa jaa rahaa hai.

yeh leejiye meree aaraa. aap ka is se ittifaaq karnaa bilkul bhi zaroori naheN.

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Dil jis ka phaNs gaya hai muHabbat kay jaal meN
KhushiyaN usee ko miltee hain runj.o.malaal meN
aap agar miSrah-e-awwal ko caanii aur caanii ko awwal bana deN tu baat ziYadah mohaccir ho jaYe gii.

KhushiyaN usee ko miltee hain runj.o.malaal meN
Dil jis ka phaNs gaya hai muHabbat kay jaal meN


Quote:
Farmaan hai Khudaa ka rahe yeh khayaal meN
MaaN-baap se kalaam nah kerna jalaal meN
Theak baat

Quote:
Dekho kabhie nah phaNsna takabbor ke jaal meN
Aata hai har kamal kisee din zawaal meN
yahaN par "har kamal" kuch samajh naheeN aaYaa.


Quote:
Kahne lage woh sunke sawal.e wafa mira
Posheedah hai jawab tumhaare sawaal meN
bohat Khoob she'r hai

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Subse ziyadah shukr ke sajde kiye adaa
Usne hi jo jiyaa tha muSeebat ke Haal meN
maZmooon acha hai lekin doosraa miSrah mazeed waZaHat chahtaaa hai.

Quote:
Woh door rah ke aur bhee mere qareeb hai
Ab dooriyaaN hii Theek haiN mere khayaal meN
aap ke she'r kee yeh bhi Soorat ho saktee hai.

woh door reh ke aur bhi dil ke qareeb the
yeh dooriyaaN bhi Theek haiN mere khayaal meN

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Jab tak nah deN azaan woh hotii nah thee saHar
Wallaah! Kya asar tha azaan-e "Bilaal" meN
pahle miSrah meN lafzooN ke raddo badal se behtree aa saktee hai.

jab tak nah voh azaan deN hotee nah thee saHar
Wallaah! Kya asar tha azaan-e "Bilaal" meN

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:Qassim: pahooNch gaya woh urooj.e kamal tak
Jis ne guzaari umr kisee ke malaal meN
malaal meN koyii urooj-e-kamaal tak kaise pouNch saktaa hai yeh baat kuch digest naheeN ho rahii


aap kee koshish majmoii taur par qaabil-e-satahish hai so meree jaanib se dilee daad pesh-e-Khidmat hai.

Khuda kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyadah


Khair andesh

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Dosto! Aik arse k baad ghazal kehna ka mauqa mila ... Jaise hee tamaam huvii ghazal socha aap sab kay saath share kee jaa'ay ... Apni aaraa se zaroor navaaziayga



Dil jis ka phaNs gaya hai muHabbat kay jaal meN
KhushiyaN usee ko miltee hain runj.o.malaal meN

Farmaan hai Khudaa ka rahe yeh khayaal meN
MaaN-baap se kalaam nah kerna jalaal meN

Dekho kabhie nah phaNsna takabbor ke jaal meN
Aata hai har kamal kisee din zawaal meN

Kahne lage woh sunke sawal.e wafa mira
Posheedah hai jawab tumhaare sawaal meN

Subse ziyadah shukr ke sajde kiye adaa
Usne hi jo jiyaa tha muSeebat ke Haal meN

Woh door rah ke aur bhee mere qareeb hai
Ab dooriyaaN hii Theek haiN mere khayaal meN

Jab tak nah deN azaan woh hotii nah thee saHar
Wallaah! Kya asar tha azaan-e "Bilaal" meN

:Qassim: pahooNch gaya woh urooj.e kamal tak
Jis ne guzaari umr kisee ke malaal meN


MuKhlic,

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Qasim bhai bht umdah likha aapne......bht acha ........aur yaqeenan aapne apni pasand ke mutabiq iss me radobadal bhi kia hoga..........aur me yaqeen rakhti hun ke aik hi sher 10,000 tarhaan likha jasakta hai ......lekin jo shayer ka khayal hai wo nahi badla jasakta .....usul koyi bhi bandh sakta hai par khayal jis peraye me bandha gaya ho usko usul me koyi dhaale to us khayal ki gehrayi khatam hojati hai................

so bht acha likha bht umdah dil khush how parh kar


wese to har kisi ka apna nazarya hai................: )
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BOhat hi khoob Bohat khoobsorat ghazal kahi aap ne oor har shair lajawab
magar mujhe ye shair bohat khoobsoraT LAGA
SUBSE ZIYADA SHUKR K SAJDE KIYE ADAA
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Dosto! Aik arse k baad ghazal kehna ka mauqa mila ... Jaise hee tamaam huvii ghazal socha aap sab kay saath share kee jaa'ay ... Apni aaraa se zaroor navaaziayga



Dil jis ka phaNs gaya hai muHabbat kay jaal meN
KhushiyaN usee ko miltee hain runj.o.malaal meN

Farmaan hai Khudaa ka rahe yeh khayaal meN
MaaN-baap se kalaam nah kerna jalaal meN

Dekho kabhie nah phaNsna takabbor ke jaal meN
Aata hai har kamal kisee din zawaal meN

Kahne lage woh sunke sawal.e wafa mira
Posheedah hai jawab tumhaare sawaal meN

Subse ziyadah shukr ke sajde kiye adaa
Usne hi jo jiyaa tha muSeebat ke Haal meN

Woh door rah ke aur bhee mere qareeb hai
Ab dooriyaaN hii Theek haiN mere khayaal meN

Jab tak nah deN azaan woh hotii nah thee saHar
Wallaah! Kya asar tha azaan-e "Bilaal" meN

:Qassim: pahooNch gaya woh urooj.e kamal tak
Jis ne guzaari umr kisee ke malaal meN


MuKhlic,

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Woh door rah ke aur bhee mere qareeb hai
Ab dooriyaaN hii Theek haiN mere khayaal meN
 Mashallah :clap6
bohat hi khubsurat ghazal kahi aapne bhai...
khaskar yeh wala shair bohat hi
umdahai...
nacheez ki janib se dheron daad-o-dua kabool kijiye.. :flower3
bohat khush rahein...


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bahot khoob Qasim bhaahi,achhi ghazal kahi aap ne,
bahot khush rahiye.
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Qasim App ne aik umdah ghazal kahi hay
Har shair hi buhat khobsurat aur dilkash hamesha ki tarah
buhat acha laga parh kar app ki is tehrer ko
Ab konsa shair qoute karain k tamam hi asha'ar qoute karne jesse hain
Buhat si daad qabool kijiay
Khush Rahiay
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