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This is a discussion on Jheel Si within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam-O-alaikum...! janab aap sab ki khidmat main aik ghazal lekar hazir hua hun...! Arz kia hai...................
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| Assalam-O-alaikum...! janab aap sab ki khidmat main aik ghazal lekar hazir hua hun...! Arz kia hai................ ![]()
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| Faisal bht khoob likhi hai... lekin Wazan ki kuch kami lagrahi hai..ya phir Radeef theek nahi lagey.. behar haal khayaaal bht hi umda..aur junoon ne ishq ka tabsira bhi khubsurti sey kia hai... mashq jaari rakhein.... pehla Shair kaafi accha aur theek laga hai.. keep writing.. and keep sharing.. shukriyaa
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by the way buhat shukria ke aap ne nazar saani ke saath saath izzat bakhshi..! thanks a lOt..! Last edited by Faisal Mahmood; 07-16-2008 at 03:29 PM. |
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| salam... janab comments to dain k maine kaisi poetry post ki hai... aap logon ki islah ka intizar haii..! |
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| bht umdah faisal bahi
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| Yunh to pee leyta hoon do chaandh sharbain magar teri nigha se pee loon to ta dair mehkati hain mujhey kia hi kehney faisal bhai yunh to sari ghazal bohat zabardast hai lakin phela aur ya shair to bohat hi zabardast hai yunhi likhtey rahain INSHALLAH mazeed nikhar ayega.ALLAH PAK aap ko sada kush rakhain. Ameen Sum Ameen
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| bohat khoob............... .....keep sharing apna khayal rakhyega |
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| good mery veer,,,,,mashq jaari rakhiy,,,,,Achha khyal hi,,,,,,,
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