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Old 07-14-2008, 09:48 AM
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Assalam-O-alaikum...!
janab aap sab ki khidmat main aik ghazal lekar hazir hua hun...!
Arz kia hai................

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Faisal bht khoob likhi hai...
lekin Wazan ki kuch kami lagrahi hai..ya phir Radeef theek nahi lagey..
behar haal khayaaal bht hi umda..aur junoon ne ishq ka tabsira bhi khubsurti sey kia hai...
mashq jaari rakhein....
pehla Shair kaafi accha aur theek laga hai..
keep writing..
and keep sharing..
shukriyaa
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Wo mujhsey Baat Tou karta~!
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Old 07-15-2008, 04:50 PM
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Faisal bht khoob likhi hai...
lekin Wazan ki kuch kami lagrahi hai..ya phir Radeef theek nahi lagey..
behar haal khayaaal bht hi umda..aur junoon ne ishq ka tabsira bhi khubsurti sey kia hai...
mashq jaari rakhein....
pehla Shair kaafi accha aur theek laga hai..
keep writing..
and keep sharing..
shukriyaa
...salaam...janab aap aise ba-zoq logon ki agar islah saath rahi to improment hoti rahay gi..!

by the way buhat shukria ke aap ne nazar saani ke saath saath izzat bakhshi..!
thanks a lOt..!

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Old 07-20-2008, 08:57 AM
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salam...

janab comments to dain k maine kaisi poetry post ki hai...

aap logon ki islah ka intizar haii..!
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bht umdah faisal bahi
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Old 07-20-2008, 11:15 AM
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Yunh to pee leyta hoon do chaandh sharbain magar
teri nigha se pee loon to ta dair mehkati hain mujhey


kia hi kehney faisal bhai yunh to sari ghazal bohat zabardast hai lakin phela aur ya shair to bohat hi zabardast hai yunhi likhtey rahain INSHALLAH mazeed nikhar ayega.

ALLAH PAK aap ko sada kush rakhain. Ameen Sum Ameen
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Old 07-20-2008, 04:01 PM
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bohat khoob............... .....keep sharing
apna khayal rakhyega
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Old 07-20-2008, 11:21 PM
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salam..aap sab ka buhat shukria
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Old 07-22-2008, 08:28 PM
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good mery veer,,,,,mashq jaari rakhiy,,,,,Achha khyal hi,,,,,,,
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