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This is a discussion on Jana'n within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam-o-allekum. This is another ghazal Gar in hathon ki lakeron men tu nahen jana地 Meri kismet, Koi tujh se gilla ...
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06-01-2006, 07:37 PM
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Assalam-o-allekum. This is another ghazal Gar in hathon ki lakeron men tu nahen jana地 Meri kismet, Koi tujh se gilla nahen jana地 Chand ghariyan jo tere sang sang beti hain Umar bhar ke liay ab aur kuch nahen jana地 Ham ne mana ke kathan raste hojaen gay Chandani shab men tera sath gar nahen jana地 Mujh ko pholon ki talab, ab na khizaon se gila Sawani rut se bhi koi gharaz nahen jana地 Tum jo har roz yun khwabon men chale ate ho Zulm acha hay magar is kadar nahen jana地 Hukum tera tha k hum bhool kar jian tujh ko Saaf keh dete ab ye shairi nahen jana地 S.R MEHTAB
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06-01-2006, 09:03 PM
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[quote=duaa1] walaikum asslam janab bohut khoob zabar10Mujh ko pholon ki talab, ab na khizaon se gila Sawani rut se bhi koi gharaz nahen jana地 
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06-01-2006, 10:23 PM
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bahot khoob janaab,bahot khoobsurat khayalaat ka izhaar kiya aap ne,lekin "qaafiya" ki kami mehsoos huyi, bahot khush rahiye.
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06-02-2006, 07:50 AM
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06-02-2006, 07:52 AM
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[quote=rida jabeen] Quote:
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06-02-2006, 07:54 AM
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06-02-2006, 08:12 AM
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Tum jo har roz yun khwabon men chale ate ho Zulm acha hay magar is kadar nahen jana地 Wah kiya kehnay hein......wah @};- @};- @};-
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#9
06-02-2006, 11:54 AM
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Tum jo har roz yun khwabon men chale ate ho Zulm acha hay magar is kadar nahen jana地 Hukum tera tha k hum bhool kar jian tujh ko Saaf keh dete ab ye shairi nahen jana地 Bht hi umda in 2 Lines ka tu jawab hi nhi Mehtab Bhai bht c daad qabooL karain
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06-02-2006, 02:56 PM
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Jana'n 
